My current love for you


Im in trouble,Im an addict,Im addicted to this guy he's got my heart tied in a knot hes all i want and more and he is way out of my league. I feel you comfort me, Reminding me... that I'm alive, I don't wanna die, I don't wanna waste another day, Or night, I know there's something more, Than what we're living for, I see it in the stars, I feel it on the shores, I know there's something more, That we might be alone, Alone down here, We all want to have some faith, At least that's true in my case. I love the way how you talk,your expressions,your music taste even tho it sucks you are my every thought you are my everything now. This world may cumble but Least I found my only source of light. Your my smile on the rainy days and I'm your smile when your overwelmed and on the hot days. You complete me
Even tho its long distance it still feels like your here as I sleep in your shirt and your socks I still love you and your my only source of light. 1


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  • Talos
    September 22
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    nice its pretty good got some grammer issues but pretty good

  • Blank Pages
    September 20
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    only one thought left to share:
    awwwwww..
    I'm bookmarking this!
    -Ali


  • jkingmaker
    September 19

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    Im in trouble,Im an addict,Im addicted -> I'm or I am
    guy he's got my heart tied in a knot -> guy. He's got...

    I like what you have written. There are a number of grammar issues you need to clean up. Polish this piece up. It could be very good.