Snow White Retold-Chapter 16

Scarlett,Darvy,and I set off in her carriage to my house.Every inch closer we got,I would get a feeling of sorrow.Almost like something was terribly wrong.1

Scarlett:"So,do you think the Contess-my mother-will be shocked?I know I will.I want to know exactly how she looks now.She should be approaching the age of fifty now."2

Snow:"Fifty?Wait a minute?She was young when my father married her."3

Scarlett:"That you are mistaken.You see,she has a looking glass in a chest.It keeps her young.She sent me away when I was younger because I was playing with it,and it almost broke."4

Darvy:"Well,now I am going up against an old woman."5

We all laughed a laugh of uncertainess.6

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Contess:"Looking glass on the wall,tell me where is she now?"8

Mirror:"She is edging nearer my fair Contess.But,she is not alone.O no.They have picked up another guest.Someone from your past."9

Contess:"It couldn't be?"10

Mirror:"Yes.It is your daughter,who is having a child of her own."11

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Darvy:"So,um...Snow?Have you thought about my offer?"13

Snow:"Let's not talk about this now Darvy.I would rather wait until I have seen my--FATHER!!!"14

There in the fields was my father.15

Snow:"Stop the carriage.FATHER!!!"16

John:"Hello young lady.To whom do I owe this pleasure?"17

Snow:"Father it's me.It's me father."18

John:"I am not sure who you are my dear."19

Snow:"Father listen to me.It's me,Snow."20

John:"Snow?My daughter Snow died five years ago."21

I looked at him in disbelief.22

Darvy:"Well,this is going to be tough."23

Scarlett:"I'll say."24

Author notes

A little twist

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