The Miserable chapter 2 (Naruto)

(Quick note, this is from the play: Les Miserables, one of my past huge obsessions.)1

(Also, I am making Hinata Fantine, only because Fantime is a great singer, and beautiful person, one of my faveriots. After Epionine, and because I love Hinata)2

Years later3

"Oh god, when will the foreman give us a break?" women conplained at their job. He has working their butts off everyday.4

It was also the time of day when Sailors would come to the harbor for women, as always.5

Another woman sighed. "You know what? At the end of the day, everyday, it's always colder, and worse. France isn't getting any better!"6

"I know right? And the foreman today isn't making it any better!"7

"Yes!" another chimed in. "Him and his wandering hands.."8

"And is horrible breath!"9

"Psh!" another woman walked into the conversation to fill them in. "It's because poor little Hinata hasn't given him his way!"10

The others sighed.11

"When will she act right?"12

"Who knows.."13

Later that day, Hinata and the workers has recieved thier daily mail.14

"Oh my!" Hinata thought outloud, reading her letter.15

"Well what do we have here, little Hinata?" a woman asked trying to read her letter. "Come on Hinata! Let's here all this news!" she took the letter form her hands. "Dearist Hinata" she read. "You must send us more money! Your child needs a doctor, there's no time to lose!"16

"A child, eh?" another said.17

"Give that back!" Hinata bellowed, trying to get her letter back.18

There was a little fighting for about ten seconds before the mayor of the town and the foreman had came in.19

"What is this fighting all about, ladies?" the mayor asked.20

"Sir Yodamine!" Hinata and the woman asked, straighting up.21

"My god, this is a factory! Not a circus.. I run a business, not a repute! I am the mayor of this town!" 22

Yes, Yodamine, the prisoner 24601, is Mayor of town.23

"I go to you two to solve this out. Now please, be pacient as you can."24

"Now somebody say how this began!" the forman ordered.25

"Alright!" the woman jumped right infront of Yodamine and the foreman. "Hinata is the one who began this! She's hiding a kid in some little town! She has to pay them, you can guess why she picks up the extra, and wokrs hard! So leave me no wrong!" 26

Then the woman turned to Hinata and gave a sly smile, "And the boss wouldn't like it!"27

"Is this true?" the foreman asked.28

Hinata sighed and stepped forward to the foreman and Yodamine. "Yes it's ture, there is a child. She is my daughter. Her father left us, leaving us with no money at all. Now she lives with an Inn keeper and his wife, what is wrong with that??"29

The foreman laughed. "I might have known that 'betch' could bite. I might have know this cat had claws. I might have known your little secret! But dearist Hinata! I never knew you would be like that." then he snickered. "You play this virgin in the light, but no virgin in the night!"30

"I think you should fire the wh*re!" the woman she fought with yelled in joy.31

Hinata was about to hit her, when foreman grabbed Hinata's hand. "Right my girl! On your way..."32

"Yes sir..." Hinata sighed, got her things, and left her work.33

As Hinata roamed the streets, dreaming of how she wishes her daughter well, thinking of ways for money, the daily Sailors looking for wh*ores where near the harbor.34

"Hey, there Miss!" Hinata turned around. A woman was looking at her locket. "Nice lil' trinket ya got there!"35

Hinata thought hard for a quick second.36

"It's a shame, I'd die to have that!" the woman went on.37

"Madame! I'll sell it to you!" Hinata chimed. Thought, that locket was very special to her. A little memory of her daughter.38

"Hm, I'll give you four!"39

"That wouldn't pay very moch for anything, Madame."40

"Alright, five." the women smirked. "But your far to egar to sell! My goodness."41

"I need the money!"42

"Deal or no deal!"43

"Pleane, madame! Make it ten!"44

"No more than five! Deary, me must all need to stay alive with some sort of money in our pockets!" 45

"Fine..." Hinata took off her necklace, and the woman gave her five frances. (Franks, is how you say it, or how it seems.)46

"My deariest!" Hinata turned around to see a woman petting Hinata's hair. "What beautiful hair you have! It's worth alot to have such vibrant, geourgus locks!"47

Hinata got away from her. "Don't touch me! Leave me and my hair alone!"48

"Eh? Well, I'll buy for hair for ten frances!" the woman smiled, knowing Hinata needed it. "Just think of that."49

Hm.. what shall I do? Hinata thought. Ten frances, it pays the debt! I can pay for my poor dear daughter!50

"Alright!" Hinata chopped off all her precious hair, leaving her wiht the American Bob. (Short boyish hair. Or it says in my english book.) And she was payed the ten frances she was promised.51

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  • airknight
    September 28
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    pretty cool


  • KotoneTheVocaloid
    September 16

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    That was...Beautiful! Hinata, the things you do for your daughter! And Yodamine, you were such a good guy after prison you became Mayor! awesome! *cheers*