"Where are we off to then Doctor?" asked Rose, as she clung onto the console.1
"Well i was thinking that we could go to new york, 56, to go see elvis perform is legendary hound dog performance, what you think?"asked the Doctor.2
Rose grinned at him.3
"Elvis it is!".4
The Doctor pulled some controls and off they went travelling throughout time and space, only to land on their backs laughing as they landed.5
"1956. i wasn't even born yet. Wow!" commented Rose.6
" I was, came and watched i did, what a concert and what an mover!"answered the Doctor" You'd better get changed into something more fifty-ish, don't you think? You'll cause i riot out there".7
"Good idea, Are you getting changed?" asked Rose.8
"No. The best thing about wearing brown pi-stripped suits, with trench coats mean you fit in anywhere. Especailly the fifties and the twentieth century".9
"Ok show off. I'm of to get changed. Back in ten."10
With this Rose walked out of the room. Leaving the doctor grinning to himself.11
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The Doctor pushed and hit a few levers to make sure the TARDIS was secure, Rose came back out.13
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She looked beautiful wearing, a pink 1950's rockabilly retro dress with a white belt and white high heels. she had her hair frizzy but up.15
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"Blimey, you look beautiful". commented The Doctor.17
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Rose smiled.19
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"You don't look too bad yourself-you have had a wash havn't you?" Asked Rose laughing.21
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The Doctor grinned back.23
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"Yes Ma'am".25
The Doctor hooked his arm, and Rose put her arm through and the walked out of the TARDIS.26
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The scene was beautiful well so Rose thought.28
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The Doctor shut the door behind him, and walked into the building to where Elvis was to perform.30
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"Your going to love this. 1956, by now Elvis is known over the country and is now appearing on the Ed Sullivan show, Hound Dog, desn't just cause contraversy, it unveils a new dominion in music..Rock'N'Roll.."32
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Rose3 squeeses The Doctor's arm, and grins.34
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"And boy doesn't he just Rock'N'Roll."36
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The Doctor looks at Rose grinning.38
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"He may be a hot sensational Rock'N'Roll singer, but i'm the date."40
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the both grinned and settled down to watch the most incredible man of the moment.42
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(On speakers).44
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"Might i introduce ladies and gentlemen......ELVIS PRESLEY."46
Adding your comment:
I can't wait for you to add more. I don't read much fan fiction, but Doctor Who is a show I certainly love it on. You have the characters personalitys down pat in this too! Welcome to storywrite, and please do add more soon! I can not wait to see their adventure! 
Joann 
