Wings

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I spread my wings and start to fly
I start to go into the sky
My little feather is flying down
It doesn't make a single sound2

I feel so free as I spread my wings
I think I could scream a million things
So I sing my little song
I start to sing all day long3

I start to land from the clouds
I think it's time to go now
My human friend awaits
She doesn't want me to be late.

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  • Melancholic Smile
    September 20

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    This is a really sweet little poem and fits well with the prompt you chose I did say stories only for the contest, but I still want to comment and let you know that I very much enjoyed it. The only tiny error is you forgot to capitalise an I. It's very cute and I could feel the sense of freedom the little bird had. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • Le Masquerade silver member
    September 16

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    Love it! My fav part was the first two lines -

    'I spread my wings and start to fly
    I start to go into the sky'

    And the background you chose makes the poem sound peaceful.
    This is really good, I look forward to reading more of you poems GREAT JOB!

    -Masq


  • Schuyler VanAlen gold member
    September 16
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    Ooh!! This is good.


  • Para Turkey gold member
    September 16
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    awesome job!!!!! short but sweet

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