Is it enough to love
To love as much as i can
And not give anything back
To love like I've never been hurt1
Is it enough to breathe
To never take a breath for granted2
Is it enough to die
Sometimes it seems
No one will notice me
Until I leave for good3
Somebody rip my heart out
And let me bleed out
But I wonder if anyone
Will save me
Or even keep saving me
Author notes
got the start of each stanza from avril lavigne's song anything but ordinary
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that's so cool. I don't really know the song myself, but i can tell that this probably wasn't the easiest poem to write about. Well, personally i think it was definately worth the work. i loved it!!!!<3
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thanks
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Another really great poem
Don't listen to Avril Lavigne, so don't know the song...but you worked the words in well.
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i had actually been working with the words in my head for a while, but this was the final product.
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Job Well Done
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thank you very much
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