The Hallway was silent...

The hallway was silent..too silent. I was too hesitant on taking any further steps--it seemed my heart beating was the only speck of life present. But I shook that thought away and continued walking.1

My destination was room 6E1, but it seemed very far away. Actually, it looked as if as I walked closer to it, the more farther away it was. 2

Then I heard...a foot step. But it wasn't mine. I gulped and tried to ignore it, but then I had to face this intense feeling that someone was behind me. Gathering up all my courage I...didn't turnt to see who it was and just started walking faster towards the room. How long would this take? I wondered, as the seconds passed on as hours, to days, to months.3

Finally, I approached the door handle of the door to room 6E1. This was it, I thought. I'm going to die. Here.4

So, I reached out my hand, and, trembling, I took hold of the doorknob. My heart beat faster and faster. I just couldn't take it anymore! The intense was killing me.5

I opened the door and in one swift motion I was attaced by...lollipops. And confetti. Oh, and cupcakes.6

"Surprise!! Happy be-lated birthday!!" Everyone said.7

I, frankly, was startled, but surprised too, since it was a surprise celebration after all. "Thanks, eveyone!!" Then I turned to look to see who was behind me...but there was no one there. In less than three seconds, I fainted.8

Then I woke up and saw....Michael Jackson?!?!

Author notes

this was an assigment we had to do for a Do Now in english class ^_^

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