Looking back in my life when I wasn't so lovely.
I was so selfish and afraid to admit I was lonely.
To think of the mistakes I knew I was making.
How silly of me, to think I was good at faking.1
I knew the difference between right and wrong.
My problem was I would pretend to be strong.
Oh how negative I was toward a life full of trials.
I was stuck on all the earthly brands and titles.2
But then I came to know who you are and what your about.
That your love has no end and faith in you will leave no doubt.
Your presence in my life has changed all my earthly intentions.
So all my thanks go to you father for your divine interventions.3
Now I'm a believer and my faith in you grows.
I want to show others how your vast love flows.
It's all coming down for me to follow your plan.
I want to always follow through, oh I know I can.4
Simply because...5
I have finally come to know who you are and what your about.
That your love has no end and faith in you will leave no doubt.
Your presence in my life has changed all my earthly intentions.
So all my thanks go to you father for your divine interventions.6
My earthly desires have folded and will submit,
For your will has become something I can't quit.
To finally realize that you are father and king.
Your grace is big enough for absolutely everything.
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this is really good is it supposed 2 be a poem if so u shuld try allpoetry. ; - )
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Thanks for the comments!
I write both poetry and lyrics. I consider this one both.
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This was amazing and I think you did a wonderful job. One little thing is that I would capitalize father and you when ever you are adressing God or Jesus, but other than that this was simply amazing. I too put a christian poem up but my poem isnt just about Christianity and is no where near as great as yours.
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nice
I really like this poem. The your in p6 should be you're. I think this is a nice testiment of your faith -
wow! i don't believe in God or any gods for that matter. but that doesn't effect this poem in any, this is amazingly, beautifully written. i hope that this isn't the only poem you have written. and that you wrote this all by yourself is very impressive.
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Thank you!
I really do appreciate your comment! I have other poems! I will be sure to put them up asap!
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I did write this myself. I really do appreciate everyone commenting.
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This is really good. Great rhyming scheme and all. Did you write this up yourself?
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Jesus appeals to the empty suburbanites.
Glad that it will stop you from hurting people.
Give your money to charity.
Jesus was a poor man.
You are his disciple, so all of your wealth should go to the poor.
If you live in a big house you will never get into heaven.
Read the book. -
oooh, yaya! not often you find christian stuff on sw, but this is great! it should be a song if it isnt already! nice way of wording, but not too much as to defer the reader. nice job, very well pronounciated.
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