Tinges of Crimson

You light my world on fire1

Tinges of crimson, orange, blue2

Tongues of flame3

My need for you an inferno of cold electric desire4

And pure, deep love5

Smiles and loving whispers grace your lips6

I long to kiss them7

Tender thoughts and dreams of sun8

Play across my mind9

I love you10

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  • Farhan gold member
    November 6

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    Hello there!

    This was a nice poem with really old idea but in really nice way. I liked it. Anyways, thanks for giving me such a nice entry. Happy writing in the future and best of luck in the contest.
    Farhan