If you cry I cry

She stared out the window at the delicate snow floating to the cold ground outside. As she stared out hot salty tears poured down her fragile cheeks. She counted every breath she saw in the wintry air around her.1

She opened the window and looked around, spotting her boyfriend asleep on the bed. Another silent tear rolled down her cheek as she stared at him. He rolled over and looked at her.2

“Good morning” He groaned. She smiled weakly without saying a word. To her surprise he didn’t notice the open window. He began to stagger to the bathroom. Once he was out of the room she place one leg out the window, then the other. Sitting on the frame she listened the running water from the bathroom shower. Her tears poured heavier as she sat there.3

As she cried she didn’t realize the bathroom open. A hand rested gently on her shoulder.4

“Are you okay” A familiar voice asked.5

“Yeah I’m fine” She smiled. She felt something wet sliding down her neck, it was a tear drop. She looked up to see him in tears. “Baby?! What’s wrong?”6

“You cry. I cry. “He whispered softly in her ear. She shivered as his breath tickled on her neck.7

“I’m sorry” She whispered in his ear trying to climb in the window. She realized she was stuck. “Baby... I’m going to pull myself up. Can you go start breakfast?” She said choking back her painful tears. She felt her body slipping, as she had flipped to her stomach when she tried to climb in the window. 8

“Are you sure you want me too?” He asked not realizing her body sliding out of the window seal little by little.9

“Yeah… I’ll be in there in a second” She assured him. He walked out of the run. When he was gone she began to cry. With in minutes she was falling to the snow ground bellow. To her it was not falling in the last moment.. No it was flying. It was magic. It was her nightmare too… It was dieing alone…10

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Okay I know it's confusing.. This is a the Prolouge to the up coming story..

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  • Ghost of a Siren
    October 18, 2005
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    Wow, this was very sad and beautiful. Wonderful job, let me know if you write more to this.


  • petrichor
    October 12, 2005
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    The description at the beginning was excellent. All of it was very good, I hope to read the story that is coming up. Just a spelling error at the end 'dying' not 'dieing' But apart from that very good idea here, I will keep my eye out for the next.