My dear hostess ch.1

"Miu hurry up!"1

"I'm going, I'm going." Miu called to her mother as she stepped out of the shower. Sighing heavily she got her clothes on brushed her hair and began walking down. This is so stupid we come from Razuri and yet we have to follow human rules, Miu thought annoyed as she stepped down to the kitchen.2

"Miu next time I shall summon Naia to awake you." Miyuki Miu's mother complained.3

"Mother I don't understand it. In Razuri I am already a full fledge summoner and host. Why must I be in the Human world. They are so obsolete." Miu complained as she ate her breakfast.4

Razuri the parallel world of Earth. It is known to be where sorcerers and summoners come from. Summoners can do as their name suggest summon creatures bound to the eight elements: water; fire; wind; earth; darkness; light; mind; and energy.5

Depending of the energy of the summoner the creature will be stronger or weaker. Yet there are prices to use them. Some require to be bound, most require a taste of the blood, the dark summoning require either your heart or virginity they aren't used often.6

"We are here in human territory for study. I am a book keeper you know that. So now off to school you go." Miyuki said refering to her position in the high council of host'. Even though 'sorceress' and 'sorcerer' is the term for humans they are actually called 'hosts' for their are the hosts of power.7

Hosts are women and men from Razuri who can channel the 'midka' or power in their bodies and turn them into real power and energy. They can go far as changing the genetic structure of something or destruction. Midka is only channeled by a selected few making the host a powerful person. 8

The oldest midka users are in the high council of hosts. Miyuki is a book keeper or a person who finds information and logs it for the council.9

Miu walked to her torture chamber high school. I mean come on the high council has positioned me to be a warrior. I am the strongest in my division and I have to go to a place filled with ignorant humans, Miu thought angrily.10

Even though she says that her anger is because she has fallen for a human, yet the human wouldn't give her the time of day. She stopped by an old bookstore and saw a book with markings on it. 11

"The mark of Razuri?" she asked confused she walked in and saw an old man their. 12

"Good morning miss how may I help you." The man asked his brow looked old and troubled.13

"That book I wish to obtain it." Her voice had authority in it and the man nodded.14

"It shall be 26 dollars." The man said troubled as he gave the book to Miu in exchange for the money. "But be careful the last three people who bought the book returned it saying horrible things about it."15

"That's because they are ignorant and don't know what they are doing." Miu responded as she stuck the book into her book bag walking towards her home instead of school. Her mother had walked to her 'job' already so she just went straight home. 16

Once inside she stripped herself of her clothes and walked over to her closet. The air conditioner was on making her nipples perk up. Miu shook her head angrily, seeing herself in the mirror for a moment. She adorned her fathers' lilac eyes and her mothers sandy blonde hair. Her body was way too underdeveloped holding small breasts and a childish figure. 17

In Razuri she made her reputation overcome her appearance yet here se couldn't do anything about it. Inside her closet her warrior clothes were there. She placed them on feeling the cold clothes on her bare body making her nipples become even more pronounced.18

She made the book appear before her as she flipped the pages. Names of creatures who may be summoned and how. She smiled what to expect of these stupid humans. She found a name that captured her interest. Aram it said Miu always liked names that started with A.19

"I, Miu want the heart of Amayira, I want him to fall in love with me." Miu began the summoning by declaring what she wished for first.20

"Mio kerado azu neihm pado meia no kechi serdii, Aram." She pronounced the words of summoning and felt her midka swirl in her veins as the summoning was happening. Darkness materialized before her as a figure started to appear. 21

"Darkness?" Miu asked in shock not being able to undo the summoning.22

A man began taking form as coal wings emerged from the darkness. Miu saw what she summoned a Dark summoning. Aram had long black hair in a pony tail with kin gold eyes that swirled with red. He had a great body no doubt the Dark summoning's were known for beauty. A crow rested on his shoulder and he chuckled.23

"Hello my new master." Aram chuckled saying this. He has waited centuries to be released. To his luck he found a warrior hostess to have summoned him.24

"Neidu." Miu sneered through clenched teeth. She knew either her heart or her virginity would fall into this man's hand.25

Aram smirked hearing the hostess curse at him. Good she knows the price, he thought as Kuroi his crow was at his shoulder. Elegantly Aram kneeled before the hostess.26

"From the shadow I had been brought as a summoning to you. Allow me to make your wish come true." Aram's voice was deep and menacing to Miu's ears.27

"Nadette mikayu sainda..." Miu began trying to de-summon him and have him sealed away but Aram noticed this as well. He worked fast having his hand enter Miu's chest until he found her heart causing her to stop talking.28

Concentrating his power Aram captured the warrior hostess' heart and removed it from her body in one swift move. Miu saw the silver light in Aram's hand her heart floating softly like if there was nothing to fear. Chains were wrapped on the light inclosing it.29

"Now now mistress Miu." His voice was calm and dripped like honey but Miu only felt fear at Aram's voice. " I wouldn't like to be de-summoned. I wish to do your bidding. To show you so." Aram dove straight to her shoulder and made his claws pierce her skin.30

"Ah." Miu gasped as something began burning her shoulder. When she looked at it red words of binding were on her shoulder.31

"I had bonded us together so now not only shall I have your heart but your body always." Aram grinned wickedly but saw something not that good. He made her clothes dissappear as he made a finger enter her sex. "You are a virgin?" 32

Miu felt her world drop she was bound to a dark summoning had her heart bound to him as well and now he's figured out that she was still a virgin. 33

"That makes it even better. When I get the boy for you...you virginity will also be mine." Aram said as he moved his finger around her clit she felt something strange and good as she released a small moan, chuckling he removed his finger from her sex. Miu saw his lustful look and she glared at him.34

"Leave." Her voice tried to tell Aram that she was boss.35

"For now yes." Aram said then looked at her seriously. "So your mother won't know." Aram started as he sent Miyuki back to Razuri. "She's at home..tell her anything and I will eat her heart." With that he vanished into thin air and left a scared Miu behind.36

She grabbed the book where it said 'Aram' and began reading.37

"Aram is also known as the Dark King Eros. He is the strongest of all dark summoning's. Known to be able to bind and seal the summoners heart to his own he is rarely summoned. Known to be able to do great things with his power. He rarely takes a woman's virginity so when he does it's when he is in a good mood." She read aloud and then cursed at herself. "Great....this is great! Nothing can be worse now." Miu exaggerated angrily as lighting started to crackle and rain began to pour.38

Feeling empty Miu decided to rub off that summoning's touch by washing herself. She scrubbed herself until she was red all around and a bit sore. Tired she grumbled her misfortune as she crawled into bed hoping to find a way to de-summon Aram tomorrow.

Author notes

This is my first go at something like this so please be reasonable with me. >.<

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  • Violette silver member
    September 20

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    Whattaya know, that was a vast improvement when it came to dialogue, characters and editing. Your writing skills are improving.

    Some interesting personalities and character names, i look forward to further plot development.

  • Starsart
    September 17
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