A Fathers Betrayel (Prologue)

Never will I again underestimate the power of my father. I will never trust him again. I though your dad was someone you could trust. Someone you can love. Some you will protect you, but sometimes the people you never expect are the main people that hurt you. Or maybe, it’s when you trust someone so much, they take that as a weakness. and when they take advantage of your weakness. Maybe that’s what hurts, but still. You would never expect your father to hurt you as bad as he hurt me…………1

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ok i got a suddon burst of thought and i wrote it down. i already got this plan out dont worry it will be worth it. and i put this is the first person. so you know it could be person. next one will be soon

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  • October 10, 2005
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    OK this is 'seeming'(j/p) realyl goos. i think that you will do a great job with this dont worry. great job so far. you got me on the edge of my seen. its kind of like... you do it on purpose. haha
    *Kim*

  • ImJustALostMemory
    October 10, 2005
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    good job

    awe nerny!! this sounds like its going to be good!! i cant wait to read the next one good job hun!
    <3
    JiGgLeZ


  • ForgottenxMe
    October 10, 2005
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    no im jsut putting it as if it was me. im not going through anything for a change. im taking a lot of stuff and putting it in a story


  • Co-Co-Cola
    October 10, 2005
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    ooh, this sounds like it will be interesting ^ ^

  • musicalangel1449
    October 9, 2005
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    Wow! This is a great little story. I sorry he hurt you, if thats what you are trying to say I'll give you a hug and wait for the next one!


    KAsey

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