“We should have a full day together!” Derek said confidently.1
I smiled. “What about you’re friends?” 2
“... It’s just going to be me and you!” 3
His bright shiny eyes stood out. To bad mines are just plane brown.4
We watched Final Destination 3 together, in 3D Which was extremely gay, but I enjoyed watching Derek’s expressions when the gorrey parts came on. After we went back to the house. We got on the internet and watched random videos together. 5
I found Derek gazing at me “What?” I asked smiling a big grin.6
He kissed me gently, his hand took mine and somehow our kiss led to the bed “Derek?” I said somewhat scared.7
“Yes.” He said sweetly and gentle.8
“I love you...” He looked at me and smiled. “I love you too.”9
Our kiss lasted for another minute, I broke away to take off his shirt.10
Once it was off he kissed me again. It was so scary to feel this way about someone. How I truly cared about Derek, and nothing in this world could brake us apart, I am never going to give up on him when it comes to other girls, not like I used to with other people I cared about. 11
His hand reached to my shirt and he slowly slipped it off. We kissed yet again. I was lost in the rythym of our mouths moving. His hand lightly touched my cheek while his other held mine. Everything was so perfect and suddenly I was brought down from my little corner of heaven when the door bell rang twice. 12
Derek chuckled and pulled away. 13
I pulled on my shirt and we raced down the stairs to see who it was. 14
I opened the door and a big man with blonde hair, tan skin, wearing blue jeans and a brown Tapout shirt with sunglasses covering his eyes was standing there gazing down at me. 15
“Is Derek here?” He asked in a broad voice.16
Derek stepped in front of me. His face suddenly turned mad.17
“What the hell are you doing here?” He said18
“I’m here to get my daughter and son.” The man answered19
“Leave!” Derek snapped20
“Where is Eddy?” He demanded21
“She’s none of you’re business!” 22
“She’s my god damn daughter!” He yelled23
“You’re daughter! You wouldn’t set you’re own daughter up for prostitution!” Derek screamed back.24
“Come on, Derek that was a long time ago! I’ve changed! I need you guys!” The man said.25
I was scared not just for me but also Derek and I wasn’t quite sure of what was going on. 26
“How did you find us?” Derek asked27
“Your mom I saw her at the gas station and...” 28
“Where is she?” Derek eagerly demanded. “Now where. It doesn’t concern you son. Were going to be a family again. And no one is going to ruin that.” He then looked at me from behind Derek. “No one.”
Author notes
DUUUNNN DUNNN DUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN ^.^
Comments
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AHHHHHHHHHH. Nooo not another tragedy
( Kitty, i feel so bad for her. :'( I must find out what happens next now!!
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Ooh Final Destination in 3-d....hardley a romance film

Aggghhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What the hell!!!!!!!!
How could you write that into this story!!!!!!!!!!!
It was all lovey-dovey and then BAMN!!!!!!!! He is there and everyone is all mad
Ugh, i hate it when things go wrong for characters
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umm love it plz hurrry and right more i am hooked
lots of love
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omg this is getting good
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Ohhhhhh *.*


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Lol yes.
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ooh!!! What's gonna happen???
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