The Perfect Life!!!!!

What a life it would be?1

Not about anybody else just me!2

Nothing but great pleasures I guarantee!3

Just listen to what i say and you'll see!4

Who are the fools?!5

They are!6

Life to hard?7

Drugs are your problem solvers for life!8

Get the needles!9

Grab the heroin!10

Smoke the weed!11

Who are the fools?!12

Parents are!13

Why work for money when you can steal it?!14

Steal next door!15

You being broke will be no more!16

Hold the gun to there head and thier pain you must ignore!17

Pull the trigger, kill the innocent and become hardcore!18

who are the fools?!19

The weak are!20

You dont like someone?21

Pull out your gun and shoot them dead!22

Oops! Killed and innocent! They should have fled!23

Fifty bullets shot and went into five peoples head!24

Screw them all! A tear you will not shed!25

Who are the fools?!26

The innocent are!27

Chocolate coat the drugs!28

Steal from the poor!29

Kill your friends and family!30

Life is all about you!31

Who are the fools?!32

The world is!33

Now you are very Ill!34

On the floor coughing up blood dying!35

This is the end of your thrill!36

Now you are crying?!37

Where are your friends?! 38

Where is your family?!39

Where are you friends in the gang?!40

Are you going to die alone?!41

Now you slowly die for an hour in agony!42

Who are the fools?!43

You are!!!!!!

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  • wow

    this is amazing. it is really good! I can hear the song in it... but if you need a doctor than i need one too. lol


  • yin20yang
    September 25

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    lol. I don't know if I should laugh or cry...but this poem is so deep. You should really try to get this published!!! Amazing!!! and you should see a psychiatrist!!!


    • RemainingWarrior
      October 16
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      why is everyone saying that? hahaha! psh....if i do that then my writing will be about ponies, rainbows and lots of flowers lol I am justing showing them how the world is and works lol....thanks very much for the comment though...i mean it.


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    September 7
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    RW need a psycologist? hahaha..nahhh...

  • s0m3guyy
    September 7
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    Wow

    You need a phycologist o.0

    • RemainingWarrior
      September 7
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      hahaha! I am the phycologist! once you turn a little crazy you tend to understand the world....but what am i talking about? i am not crazy lol ^w^


    • Someday Hero. gold member
      September 7
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      nope, he isn't this crazy when you actually talk to him.

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