The Cash and Tragedy of Mr.Majesty (part I)

I was staring at the current body of a former person I use to know.1

It was never a mansion; it used to be more like, a double wide trailer. That, too, gives it a little more elegance than it deserves. It’s more correct to his image though, it stays true to the size of the vertically-challenged yet wide tyrant. I digress. Now, it was like a dilapidated double-wide that you find in the deserted parts of a downtown area, sitting on some blocks or some shit like that.2

I am not concerned.3

I am slightly disturbed.4

He’s got enough cash now to renovate, that damage of the broken cord that exaggerates his mental escaped, from the fat, wide-white fleshy nicotine’d grayd no-balls prison in his flabby face.5

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maybe I'll add more later.

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  • Angel07
    July 25
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    Realy good.

  • Drag-o
    October 6, 2005
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    Wow, the words were great. U used them in the rite way and i think with a little more jsut a little more detail, ud be an autho. U ahve the talent u ahve the ability to keep a reader amused, great great great stuff. I think u should keep writing forever, I say in a week, with this advice, u can be published....Great stuff, great stuff!!