Blind, Broken Hearts

You know the Earth is
Dying when your heart
Begins to fade...1

You know you’re scared
And frightened of the
Future when you’re hiding,
Like a bulb in its shade.2

How can you even think
To fly again when you’re
Every second is full of dread?3

When you know you’re point in
Living is still there because you
Are not dead.4

He broke your heart again and again
So you ended that by 10
But then you remember your beautiful moments
And wonder why he didn’t.5

He was your everything,
Your one and only.
The days bright and happy,
Now they’re not so sunny.6

You cover his scent with the tears,
Erasing the past with fear,
Tracing back the steps with your cries.
Furious and outrageous,
Seriously doubtful,
Could you ever be so hopeful?7

All faith is lost.
What is the cost?
Trashed and burned.
Flashbacks are medaling
With this curse called life.8

You wear a face of shame
And misery fades
Into the darkness with the rest of reality.

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  • Rorshach gold member
    September 8

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    Good sad tale about breaking up with the boyfriend. Full of teenage heart break. A few grammatical slip ups, but I won't be pedantic.
    The best image was the one about the light bulb. A flame of illumination hiding in the dark.


    • Kyndal Laran
      September 9

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      thankyou!! (:
      but could u be pedantic and tell me what i did wrong?? lol.
      but i want to get better as much as i can while i can.