My family and I still had a lot to work through; we all knew that. But, I was willing to do what it took to make it work. The house that Mum and Dad had bought was really nice; it was exactly what we needed and was one of the houses on our street that I had always admired. 1
Taylor still had not gone to talk to her Mum. I don’t think that she was ready; I knew that she just needed time. Sooner or later, she would need her Mum and patch things up. 2
Mum had even gone to the trouble of making a nursery for Kennedy; it was beautiful. The walls were covered in this pink wallpaper. There were toys, a pine crib, change table, etc., all set up. It was the cutest thing I had ever seen, and it even brought a smile to her little face when I showed her. I know she didn’t know, but I swear she smiled. Then again, all she does is smile. 3
Most of the stuff from Luca’s and my room was in our room too. Mum had set it up. It really looked like a couple’s room, and it gave me butterflies to think that I was living with a guy I loved all my life. She had to go out and buy a lot of new furniture for Taylor’s room, though. Her Mum wouldn’t let her take anything. Mum told her that when she went over there to talk to her Mum, she lost the plot and even called the Police. She said she would never forgive or talk to her again, which I think really didn’t help Taylor in anyway. It just made her that much more determined to stay away from her, knowing that she wasn’t sorry for anything. She was sorry she was found out. 4
Life as I knew it would never be the same; too much had happened to change that. I knew deep down that I could never go back to being who I used to be. Something inside me didn’t mind that, though. I didn’t ever want to be like that again. 5
The last 6 months had changed me, and I didn’t regret what had happened. Yes, I was adopted. I was lied to, but I still had a family whose love and support would never stop. Yes, they made mistakes and lied to me, but I have made plenty of my own. We all as humans make mistakes. 6
Yes, I had lost my real Mother, but she would never truly be gone. She had the love of three daughters keeping her alive in our hearts. She loved us; I knew that. Before she died, she came around. Sadly, the disease called addiction was stronger at the time. 7
Yes I had lost a lot -- a mother, who I used to be -- but what I had gained was so much more. It had given me two beautiful sisters who I loved more than anything in the world. 8
If this didn’t happen, I would not have found Luca; I would have never known that I could love a person as much as I loved him. My loss was tragic, but the gain made it all worth it. I wouldn’t trade my life for anything. 9
I still wasn’t sure exactly who I was, but I was happy with the facts I had for the time being. So, who am I? I’m Hayleigh; I’m 17 years old with a loving boyfriend and two beautiful sisters with my whole life ahead of me. That’s all I needed to know for now. The rest I would pick up along the way.10
Taylor still had not gone to talk to her Mum. I don’t think that she was ready; I knew that she just needed time. Sooner or later, she would need her Mum and patch things up. 2
Mum had even gone to the trouble of making a nursery for Kennedy; it was beautiful. The walls were covered in this pink wallpaper. There were toys, a pine crib, change table, etc., all set up. It was the cutest thing I had ever seen, and it even brought a smile to her little face when I showed her. I know she didn’t know, but I swear she smiled. Then again, all she does is smile. 3
Most of the stuff from Luca’s and my room was in our room too. Mum had set it up. It really looked like a couple’s room, and it gave me butterflies to think that I was living with a guy I loved all my life. She had to go out and buy a lot of new furniture for Taylor’s room, though. Her Mum wouldn’t let her take anything. Mum told her that when she went over there to talk to her Mum, she lost the plot and even called the Police. She said she would never forgive or talk to her again, which I think really didn’t help Taylor in anyway. It just made her that much more determined to stay away from her, knowing that she wasn’t sorry for anything. She was sorry she was found out. 4
Life as I knew it would never be the same; too much had happened to change that. I knew deep down that I could never go back to being who I used to be. Something inside me didn’t mind that, though. I didn’t ever want to be like that again. 5
The last 6 months had changed me, and I didn’t regret what had happened. Yes, I was adopted. I was lied to, but I still had a family whose love and support would never stop. Yes, they made mistakes and lied to me, but I have made plenty of my own. We all as humans make mistakes. 6
Yes, I had lost my real Mother, but she would never truly be gone. She had the love of three daughters keeping her alive in our hearts. She loved us; I knew that. Before she died, she came around. Sadly, the disease called addiction was stronger at the time. 7
Yes I had lost a lot -- a mother, who I used to be -- but what I had gained was so much more. It had given me two beautiful sisters who I loved more than anything in the world. 8
If this didn’t happen, I would not have found Luca; I would have never known that I could love a person as much as I loved him. My loss was tragic, but the gain made it all worth it. I wouldn’t trade my life for anything. 9
I still wasn’t sure exactly who I was, but I was happy with the facts I had for the time being. So, who am I? I’m Hayleigh; I’m 17 years old with a loving boyfriend and two beautiful sisters with my whole life ahead of me. That’s all I needed to know for now. The rest I would pick up along the way.10
Author notes
Well this is it, the final chapter
Thanks heaps for reading and I hoped you liked it. Thanks for all the support you have given throughout it all, I appreciate it and when I get it published I will send all of you a free copy 
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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i've read the whole story now so my verdict will be from all of it. which i thought was absoloutly amazing. you never missed anything out, all of the feelings and emotions were put in perfectly.
XX Tear XX

beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Awesome mara I am so sad to see this end for real. Maybe you could write a follow up like maybe for her baby sister in a view years telling how she grew up maybe wanting to find out more about her mother finding her friends and such. Like i said sad to see this end huh.
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I want to say a big thankyou for all of your support with my story, I cant believe I finished it, Im not sure why i managed to keep everyone's attention, I think its cos at the start she was just so unbelievable, you had to keep coming back to see what crazy thing she would say or do next.
the plot over here is slang, I keep forgetting that not everyone talks like me lol. He basically means, she lost her cool, her temper and yelled and screamed at her Mum. Well thanks so much again. xxx QueenT ooo -
I can't believe this story is over!! I enjoyed it soo much. And I remember you telling me way back that it probably wouldn't be my thing! The truth is I haven't enjoyed reading many of the stories on the site, but you kept my attention through the whole thing!!!
I just have one question. You write, "Mum told her that when she went over there to talk to her Mum, she lost the plot and even called the Police". What the heck is a plot?
Congrats on finishing!
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Yea we better get a free copy! Its not even published and you have FANS mum, FANS! How does it feel? I loved the story so much. From beginning to end, it was great! Truly amazing. Great job! Im sad to see it end. But all good things do, right? I hope you come out with another story just as good soon! Great job.
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wow this is good u r an amazing writer to say the least wow i can't thank you enough for writing this. I only hope one day to write a story even half as good as this. I love how u put in the twist as taylor being her sister. It was done very well i would have never expected it but this is definitly an osm story i can't say anything else or im gonna cry...to late i am crying lol well this was an amazing write and i hope to erad more form u soon.
Jessy AKA bloodyblackRose
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OUTSTANDING
This entire story was OUTSTANDING! You did an excellent job. I loved this chapter, the way you tied things in and the events that you summed up were really the work of a professional. I am glad that hayleigh is finally happy, and that she does not dwell upon what is lost, but upon what is gained. I loved this entire story, I may have started it late, but I stuck to it, going to my computer everyday in hopes of a new chapter! I am really proud of you, I will not say that it would have to be the work of an amazing author to complete this literary work, because that would be FALSE. You are an OUTSTANDING, CREATIVE, AND MULTITALENTED writer. I always knew you could do it. I love you! I am sooooo happy that you are my mum! I hope that you will continue writing, sadly
this series is over! Have a wonderful day
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thankyou so much, it means so much to me that people like my work, at first people were a bit skeptical about this story. I had no idea it would be so good, I have enjoyed reading it and Im going to keep writitng. I hope that we can keep it touch and be friends. xxx QueenT ooo
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OMG is all I can say!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story...I've been following it all along the way and it's just soo amazing. I love that last paragraph, it totally tied things up. I just can't believe this is it! It's like a story that you never want to reach the end of, you just want to keep following it until the characters are old and grey lol...god words can never express how amazing I thought this story was...I can't wait for you get get it published. It was amazing...I know I keep saying that...but lol gimme a break I'm at loss for words
I'm so proud of you
even though I don't know you all that well lol. I'm out for now...congratulations on writing this story...you should be proud!
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