we fall in love1
with dropping stars2
desperate to know3
we aren't alone.
A contest entry
- Poetry!!! by Farhan.
230 points, ended November 6, 38 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Fantastic!
You should really try and extend it. It was such a nice little poem. I think i should give you a place in finalists. Okay, welcome to the finalists.
Thanks for sharing and giving me such a nice poem to read. Happy writing and good luck in the contest
Farhan. -
what an Idea, Sir jee!
This was very sweet! only if you would've written more about it, you would have deserved many many many more praises, many trophies and many other things like fame and stuff. anyways, you NEED to revisit it if you want to get any brownies for it from anyone =]
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a very sweet and short poem with a bit of meaning in it. well done louise.
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seet little poem..simple words ith simple meaning. good job dear. keep writing and good luck.
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