September 3, 2009 @ 9:40am in 2nd Period AIMS Prep

Invisible words written on a page wrinkled from age1

Dry spots made from tears shed over time2

An empty heart, spilled out on a lined canvas3

Shaking hands, scrawling messy sentences that mean nothing4

Ink spots blotting out the truth on the page5

Sentences meant to represent beauty, doing the opposite6

Manipulation by the artist, trying to find the truth in her work7

Completed heartache, the end to a story long forgotten...

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Lots of meanings, pick your choose. :/ Lots of feelings mixed into this.

Inspiration: The movie "Finding Forrester"

Forgotten Pages- Title?

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  • Just Breathe.
    September 5

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    o.o This is pretty..deep? It's really good and Forgotten Pages would be a good title, I can't make anything up. But this is really good. I found no spelling errors.

    Keep it up.