Internet Communication

Internet communication is a big problem in our century because it is not safe for both boys and girls. It is not fun in an internet chatroom for girls to give the information about them to strangers. We do not know who is using the internet in the other side of the computer. That person might be a killer or theif that want to come and rob our house. They pretend to be someone else when they actually a bad person. Both boys and girls should be smart when chatting in a Yahoo IM or other communication website!1

However, internet communication can also be a good thing to use when talking to a relative who is lives so far away from us. For example; I live in USA, and my sisters live in Vietnam. We are far across the ocean and earth from each other. We can use the internet to talk anytime we want, we can still see each other though the webcam! we can share any information we want because we already know who we are talking to. That is why communicating in the internet can be both safe and unsafe! So becareful who you are talking to!2

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please check my grammar and give me some thought about my writing! i am practicing for my writing test! if it is not good please feel free to say anything by commenting! thank you sooo much!! have a great day!!

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  • Cocoly Docolies
    September 5

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    becareful = be careful
    when for girls = for girls (you dont need the when)
    who is leaving so far away = who lives far away / who is living very far away
    Using the internet = We can use the internet
    webcamp = webcam

    thats good your a really good writer