True bliss

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The most beautiful fairy2

In all of fairy land,3

Wished she had someone4

To lend her a helping hand,5

She helped all the others6

With their problems and so on,7

But sometimes she would feel alone8

And that her willingness had gone,9

She loved to go to dances 10

And sing to magical songs,11

She'd fly away at night and12

Look at glittering ponds,13

Her kindness was all over14

Her home they called 'True bliss',15

But sometimes in her mind16

It didn't feel like this,17

Soon it was her birthday18

But nothing had been said,19

She felt so lonely like no one cared20

So cried and went to bed,21

She thought everyone had forgotten22

As the days passed by,23

This made her feel more lonely24

She felt a tear come to her eye,25

The big day soon arrived26

But not a present nor a kiss,27

She knew they'd all forgotten28

Now she wouldn't get a birthday wish,29

She walked it too her room30

Suddenly a big 'HOORAY!'31

Filled the room with happiness32

'We've been planning this for days!'33

After this she knew that34

She was loved, not missed,35

There was no need to cry because36

She loved her home, true bliss...37

Author notes

Wrote this just for your little kids, I;ve not done this kind of thing for a while, so it isn;t that good hope they enjoy it!

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  • Entwining Beauty
    January 7, 2006
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    such a cute and loving poem ,i think any child that read this poem it really would helpthem belive in fairyland ,alot of children do not believ any more,
    such a great write

  • -diamond tears-
    November 3, 2005
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    thanks. I'll try and remember to comment

  • pickles
    November 3, 2005
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    I think this is the kind of poem my daughter would like. I have one called The Wind. I think you would like it. I'll try to put it on here. I'm a newbe so be patient. Pickles

  • misticmoonlite
    October 10, 2005
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    aw this is so cute good write you penned here ..good job Linda

  • Carnivore
    October 10, 2005
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    Very cute poem. I liked the story behind it. ^_^

  • babyalah
    October 6, 2005
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    A beautiful story that you wrote here. Im glad that the fairy had a good day and that no one forgot her. I know my kids will like this as much as me. thakyou for entering my contest and good luck

  • Apache143
    October 6, 2005
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    A lovely piece of work. Im glad the fairy got a good day at the end and im sure babyalah's children will love it especially the girls........Shaz


  • Millie Music
    October 5, 2005
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    Awww cute poem i hope you do well in this contest this poem/story is great ..good luck
    love melisa

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