take my boredom away2
take it into your claws, and fly away3
like a mighty falcon4
drop it on an unwary passerby,5
sending him spiralling into perpetual dullness6
freeing me from it’s curse7
forever8
take my boredom away2
take it into your claws, and fly away3
like a mighty falcon4
drop it on an unwary passerby,5
sending him spiralling into perpetual dullness6
freeing me from it’s curse7
forever8
Author notes
So ... yeah, I STILL don´t do poetry, but since I accidentally made this (the convo was with our very own OnlyHereByForce) I thought I´d share it with the class after a bit of editing. So here you go 
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Nice Dark
That good! I likedd ittt. I love poetry, and this one really good, I liked the main feeling of it. (If that makes sence, it does to me
) Even if you don't 'do' poems, you should make another one, just for me hah, jk.
~Strawberry
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Just for you huh? Something about a strawberry maybe ... I´ll think about it
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That was cool
You should write more!
Paige
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Thank you. I´m glad you liked it
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I liked ur poem. It was really good and such, hahaha yu should write more poems on here
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lol, probably not gonna happen, but thanks anyway
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cute
That was a nice little poem, I like the idea of a "mighty falcon" snatching your boredom away and dropping it on someone else, its cute.
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Thank you. Cute is always good.
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lolz!
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Lolz indeed.
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Awww! Pretty poem! x3 luv itt
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Why thank you. I like it too
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Welcomee
yaa!
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ITs purty but i kinda feel awkward reading it since i recently wrote a poem about boredom either way i liked it short and too the point really good!
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Hehe, coming from an avid poet that means a lot
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Lol as you can tell im sorta hyper which reminds me i need to go through my portfolio and put up some of my stuff. actually it didnt remind me but i just thought of it now anyway lol thank you for calling me an avid poet not sure what its supposed to mean but thanks anyway
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Just that you´ve done a lot of poems. You know the ropes, so to speak.
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lol you can do something alot and not know the ropes i assure you on htat my poetry is freeverse usually and doesnt really follow any set rule anyway thanks lol.
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Well, usually when you do something a lot you learn things about it. You get better, you grow. And since I don´t know the rules mine doesn´t either
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Just because you learn things about them doesnt mean you can recreat the majic held within
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Maybe not ... but you can learn to recognize good ones. Which leads me back to my original means a lot point
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HAha we have officially gone threesixty and im lmao lol not really but i digress i feel as though i have begun to ramble
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Rambling is fun. Ramble away
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of course its fun. but im sure the next personw ho reads this will be very confused
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Pfft, so? You ever seen the comment chain on "Urdan the Brave Knight"?
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lolz actually i have and wow lol this is actually quite amuseing andim bored sit its all good omg i just spelled so wrong how idiotic am i
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Yeah it is. I think it´s the potential public audience that brings out the amusingness
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probably but idk its amusing nomatter what even if it was im lol which is happening as we reply on here
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Yes, it´s a double convo, pretty cool huh?
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wanna know what would be even cooler???
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No
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aww why not?
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Oh sorry, got yes and no mixed up again. I meant yes of course
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bs your a worse lier than me
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Not true. I´m a fantastic liar
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as am i but still
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You are?
Lies.
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Lol and you said you didn't do poetry!! Well you so should!! I think everyine has said the things that i was going to say about the metaphor...so...Yeah, it was great!
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Still don´t Thanks for the comment
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I have to agree with blizzard. this poem is leaking pure awesomness (sp?). haha the metaphor is great! it's so fitting and true.
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Isn´t it? As you can tell I was a BIT bored when I did it
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I think this is pretty awesome. I like the metaphor.
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Thank you I´m glad you like it.
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Woo, I like it! *highfives*
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Thanks *high-fives back*
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Woo! Not only did I witness the creation of this, but I get a shout-out? It's a good day. *Dances*
I still think it's a good poem. And I'm sure others will agree.
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Of course You´re my accomplice-in-poetry. And thanks
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