One More Cut...One Last Memory1
It was dark and stormy the night you found me there on the floor with out a care, a puddle of blood around me. You sat by my head and grabbed my arms and saw the marks I had upon them. You put your arm around me and lay there in tears. As I lay there motionless on my last breath I had a flash back go through my head… 2
Chapter One3
1 DAY EARLIER4
“Hey Caroline,” says Andrew as he walks up to her sitting on the porch. 5
“Hey Skunk, what’s up with you?” I would reply like I always did well he sat down.6
I remember it was a hot day and like every day I had my long sleeve shirt on. He always did look at me funny and I would just tell him it’s all I own.7
“Not to much Butterfly, I see long sleeves again today,” Andrew says with a little smile on his face.8
“Yup, what were you expecting a tank top,” I would say with a little chuckle and a smile.9
As I sit there I notice the look of concern on your face knowing that you know but are afraid to tell me so I stay quiet... 10
Ok, you may be wondering why I call him Skunk... I know, weird but summer of 1995 he got his haircut. He has dark black hair and he left a stripe down the center a little longer and dyed it white... I know, I know men.11
"What do you want to do today?" Skunk says as I sit there making sure my wrists don’t show.12
"I don’t know you pick today I picked yesterday," I would say still concerned about my wrist showing.13
"Ok we will go to the lake and swim," he said with a smile knowing I would say no.14
Just as he predicts I say "No how about the arcade?"15
"Sure," he says knowing I would ask him that.16
In the back of my mind I know he knows why I said no it's for the same reason I always did, and some times I wish you would just say that you know.17
On our way to the arcade he grabs my arm and pulls me to the woods and sits on a rock.18
"Caroline we need to talk," he says with a sigh.19
I know I wanted you to tell me you knew but today I wasn't sure if I was ready.20
"Ok Skunk what's up?" I say well sitting on a rock knowing what I think your gonna say....21
"Well Caroline..." He said looking at his shoes.22
"Come one Skunk spit it out," I said with a smile .He laughed and stood up23
"Never mind lets go," he said.24
"No, no, no, no, no! Skunk tell me come on," I said with a pout.25
"Awww come on Butterfly you know I can't say no when you pout," Skunk said trying not to look.26
"I know you can't that's why I do it," I said with a little grin.27
"No forget it let's go I wanna beat you at some battleship," Skunk said knowing I’d go now…28
Skunk never ever beats me at battleship.29
Author notes
it not done but yea..
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thanks for the comment
~Turtle -
I liked it, it's an interesting start. One thing though, you might want to go back and edit, maybe use spell check, don't think I saw too many spelling problems, mostly just grammar errors (Sorry sorry! I know, I'm a Grammar Nazi, lol). I DID like it though, and I plan on reading the rest of it, as I have time, or probably within the next ten minutes seeing as how I'm so bored, I could cry, lol.
-Amanda -
thank you for the comment!
~Turtle
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this is a nice begining.... i wanna see wher this goes
kim
Edited on Nov 15, 5:48 p.m. because ''. -
This was a very well written story and though I have a feeling it comes from more than that, I will leave it alone for now. Pinky is right; there are a few spelling errors in this. I will email you what I have found so far, okay? I am off to read the next bit in this journey. I love you!
Hugs
Mum -
I edited Promsiedtears story because i'm sjut cool liek that lol... any way.. plus i see her all the time so ha lol... i htink i did most of them but if you wnat to check it out after she changes it please tell me wha ti didnt edite... I'm a gramr frak too and Promsiedtears jsut looks at me funny when i correct her stuff someitmes...
-Pinky -
This look really interesting. Though you sure do got lots of stuff to edit!!!!!!! Sorry..I'm kinda a grammer freak
anywas i like this story alot...looking forward to more!
~Tia~
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Took you like a year to post it monkeay...Too many spelling mistakes though monkeay it;'s like predict and u's and stuff.... And i'm being all like i knwo what idoing lol... cause i cant spell for beans and baiscly i'm blbblering because i dotn want to go to school or do my homework...i liekd it monkeay since i read it a while ago it jsut needs some work I GONNA EDIT IT!!!!!! muahhahhahahhahahahaha... ok i'll give you the thing tomrowo cause the u's bother me and still i'm procradtinating for homework if you havent figured it out...LOVE YOU MONKEAY!
-Pinky
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