Fear

Would it be a tragedy if you seen your family die in front of you?1

Repeating to yourself that this is untrue2

The parents that once taught you to tie your own shoes3

And now they are done and through4

Who ended thier LIFE?5

Would it be sad to hear, "I want to die" repeat itself in your mind?6

Locked doors, closed curtians, darkness all around in your own room confined.7

He tried to help you but you turned your back on your friend. 8

IS he your enemy? are you blind?9

May I remind you that your are NOT perfect?10

Wouldnt it be Hell if your parents beat you everyday?11

WHAT would you say?12

Nothing because you will be on the floor crying as your soul is in the process of decay. 13

YOU will always obey.14

Will you GET up and fight?15

Wouldnt it make your ears bleed to hear your child has died?16

EXPECTing THE truck to stop but that was quickly denied.17

To make it WORSE the media makes your pain worldwide!18

AND what will you do now?19

Wouldnt it be scary witness the world's end?20

NEVER have I seen so many pray to God only to pretend.21

GIVE up and get ready to die...is that something you can comprehend?22

UP Gods children will go and you will stay stuck here...us Demons will become your new friends!23

ARE YOU SCARED?

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  • Just Breathe.
    September 5

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    Wow...o.o This is way powerful. It's well written and these questions can make the readers think. This is a really good..poem? Or let's just say questions. xD

    Anyways, this is awesome. I love it a lot. I can also kind of see this as a short song, maybe? Keep it up.


    • RemainingWarrior
      September 6
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      I love how you are wondering if this is a poem/story/song lol. to be honest i dont know what it is...just something i wrote to ask you horrible questions and leave a hidden message of hope inside the dreadful writing of fear.


  • CloakedAssassin
    September 5

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    Ah

    Very well written, all these questions for the reader to think over, though many of them are irrelevant, death is certain. i don't fear it. Basically, Whispers comment sums it all up.

    Nice style of writing and you've also inspired me to write something. which i think i shall now. Thanks
    Kurtis

  • Flightwing
    September 4

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    Very nicely written. Makes the reader think, giving them something to walk away pondering. Great style, keep it up. Strikes at the core of a person, giving an emotionla responce. Traits of a good writer.

    • RemainingWarrior
      September 6
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      thanks lol thats what i want my writing to do....just make everyone think....not alot of people do that nowadays


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    September 3

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    Life is not what you get...Expect the worse..and never give up.

    Am I scared?
    ...
    Always.
    But I'm still here.

    • RemainingWarrior
      September 3
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      you have to learn to live your life and be happy. it may get better or may steer to the right and off a cliff....maybe something is missing in life? who knows? lol ^w^

      • Someday Hero. gold member
        September 3
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        God, you and that retarded Emote, I swear...

        My life has taken it's sharp turns everynow and then, but I'm tied in for the most part..sure of course, there's parts where I want to be thrown off that cliff, but I never really have.

        And if I'm gonna be thrown off that cliff unwillingly, I pray someone will catch me.

        • RemainingWarrior
          September 3
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          Its my retard emote and i like it alot lol

          What if....what if your prayers come unheard? who will catch you falling to your doom?

          Expect the worse and you will know what to do when you are falling...everyone is a warrior and they are always in war called life.

          • Someday Hero. gold member
            September 3
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            Then if I drop, I guess it's just my fate..but then again, I don't believe in fate so..screw that. I'll fight fate my whole life.

            • RemainingWarrior
              September 3
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              Fate and destiny are all made up and created by your mind or others. fight fate all you want but you are only fighting yourself in the end. but answer me this...how can you fight fate...if you dont believe in it?

              Your own mind is your question and solution to your life.


              • Someday Hero. gold member
                September 3
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                I think..we all need something to fight, even if we don't believe in it..or we'll all just give up.

                • RemainingWarrior
                  September 3
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                  ahh....very true. but be careful of who or what you fight with. they or it will fight back even if it doesnt exist....your mind will make it real.
                  In all this....if you believe in fighting something that doesnt exist but your think it is...your mind will make it alive. Thus, when you are falling...make your mind sprout out wings from your back to save yourself or something more resourcefull or diffrent. differs on everyones mind.

                  Take charge of your mind and control your life.

                  • Someday Hero. gold member
                    September 3
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                    Very true..And I know.
                    I'm being very careful..but you can't help but want a little challenge every now and then, eh?

                    • RemainingWarrior
                      September 3
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                      Once again Snow you speak the truth. this is probably the most comments i have eva gotten! lol now are you going to message me and say hi? lol!

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