Sea's Love

Somehow I’m rising, somehow still sinking as I’m seduced by you.
And like the waves lonely love, my heart’s pounding throb resounds past the sky, just for you.
Because your outline is embossed in the stars that I watch,
while in a harmonious trance, where you are seen as if through glass.1

And just as the seas yearning tides, I feel tender in your eyes,
while desiring your soft thoughts and the memories I’ve sought.
Such as your breathless touch and the feeling of lust,
as your lips, tingling like mist, glide over the silken hills of my skin.2

With a simple squeeze of your hand, my words fall away as sand,
like the rocks by the mysteries aquatic edge, as though only your soul could ever know that
my heart tumbles through the deep and dark blue,
fluttering and muttering a sweet slow goodnight.3

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  • Farhan gold member
    November 6

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    Hello there!

    I must say that when i first saw your poem, i thought that it isn't a poem. But then i realized that it surely is. Well, talking about the poem, the flow was a bit rough but nice use of metaphors. Anyways, all in all, a nice read. i enjoyed your poem very much. .
    Thanks for giving me such a nice poem and good luck in the contest.
    Happy writing.
    Farhan.


  • DemApples
    November 1
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    i could picture this >.< photographic imagination and i think my imagination ruined the graceful bliss of the poem.


  • mememe6
    September 9
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    Very beautiful, thank you for entering!


  • lavanya
    September 7
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    beautiful mataphores are visible here ...very nice poem bit rough flow but still for me it is nice poem. keep writing and smiling. good luck dear.