Emotion

A seam in the eye,
              cracks in the heart,
                         a hole hidden within
                                         the fold of humanity,
                Festering and boiling,
       producing sensations
                                           so alien,
filling up the soul 
 and body until
                                                                   emotion
  is
  all
  we
   are.

Author notes

Tried my hand at doing odd spacings to accentuate parts and make things more interesting. I hope it goes by well!

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  • Farhan
    November 6
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    Hello there!

    Nice job. Thanks for giving me such a nice read and good luck in the contest.
    Happy writing.
    Farhan.

  • dsb0321 gold member
    September 23
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    Nice poem

    The poem stands on it's own, but the formatting does give it more flare...


  • ForestFaery
    September 13
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    the format makes it very entertaining to read thank you for entering.


  • lavanya
    September 7

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    well, now this is intresting and creative..u know u have poem fllowing in ur blood dear..u r natural poet.
    and yes background is simply matching and soothing .

    well done and keep writng.