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Love is when you can't 2
Pay attention in class 3
Cuz you're too busy looking over your shoulder4
to see if he is looking at you5
Love is when you cant6
stop thinking about7
all the things that you two could do8
Love is when you cant9
look at him without smiling10
and watching him work11
Love is when you cant12
help but be sad when he's sad and13
be happy when he's happy 14
Love is when you cant 15
wait till you get home16
so that you can count down the the exact time till u can see him again17
Love is when you cant18
help but get lost in his body and soul19
every time you look and talk to him20
Love is when you cant21
help but stay up all night22
thinking about him and what/hows he is doing23
Love is when you cant 24
help to always look at him every minute of everyday25
and smile and wonder what it would be like to have him26
Love is when you cant27
have him and some one else gets him28
but u are still happy cause he's happy29
LOVE IS ALOT OF THING TO DIFFERENT PEOPLE AND THIS IS JUST SOME OF WHAT IT IS TO ME.30
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Author notes
LOVE IS ALOT OF THING TO DIFFERENT PEOPLE AND THIS IS JUST SOME OF WHAT IT IS TO ME.
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it was good!! and so true!! i have the very same problems, but i know i will never have him because he is too good for me or someone else has him. wonderful peice. keep writing!!
~Netta~ -
thx for the spell check i didnt even realize it
love always and for ever
~*~paige~*~ -
"all the things that you to could do" 'two'
"Love is we you cant" 'when' not 'we'
"so that you can count down the the exact time till u can see him again" too many 'the's
"help but get lots in his body and soul" 'lost'
"thinking about him and what/hows he is doing" 'how'
"help to always look at him every minute of everyday" either 'help but always' or 'help always looking'
personal preference here but i think spreading it out long like this distracts me from getting to see the meat of the poem. it's like only being allowed a drop of ice cream at a time, you want to just take a big bite but never will; the Greek god's must be playing with us again...
Interestingly repetitive -
aha great poem...
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I find this rather wordy and chatty but still I enjoyed it. Thanks for letting me know and sharing it. Love you too, sis.
Brian
Edited on Oct 05 because ''. -
this is amazing i love it
Sara -
awe, this is sooo cuute and emotional....i really enjoyed reading this, beatiful write, keep the ink flowing
u expressed ur feeling the true love very well indeed
janie
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You have put your feelings and emotions in words very beautifully!! And though I'm really not one for love poetry, I really liked this one! Good job!! Keep on pennin'!!!!
S & ES
Lisa -
Wow, this is good, I really liked it. It is very true, and it holds a lot of emotions. Wonderful job, and keep it up.
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This Was A Sweet Poem
It Needs To Typo Fixing Is All
But It Was Good, You're Right Everyone Has A Different Version Of Love Thank You For Sharing Yours - Gothiq -
Very good! Good way to put how you feel love is to you.
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