Mission 1 - Help lost or confused spirits, who died before their time - freak accidents or murders - pass on.1
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The screech of tyres as they were forced to brake.3
A scream.4
CRASH!!!!!!5
"MELISSA!!!"6
The twins looked on solemnly as Eric ran to his girlfriend. The driver of the vehicle knocked unconscious by the collision. People gathering by the scene, screaming and shouting in shock, "Call an ambulance!"7
"Melissa! Mel - please wake up! WAKE UP!" Eric cried, falling to his knees beside the mangled body.8
The twins gaze moved to the most important person at the scene as sirens filled the air. A lone blonde-haired girl stood over the body in shock. Hands over her mouth, dull blue eyes wide - tears spilling down her cheeks. The transparent spirit of Melissa stood in horror and confusion - staring at her limp, lifeless body lying battered, bruised and broken in the gutter. Melissa's gaze turned to her boyfriend. Eric was frozen in shock, mouth agape, tears running freely down his face.9
"Mel...?" his voice was a weak whisper.10
"No...no, no, no! Eric I'm here! Right here, Eric!" Melissa cried. Her boyfriend didn't react - he made no move to suggest that her had heard her.11
The twins moved swiftly through the crowd to stand behind Melissa's ghost.12
"He can't hear you-" Began one,13
"- Because you no longer live in this world." Finished the other.14
Holding out their hands they said in unison, "Take our hands, it is time for you to leave this place."15
Melissa turned to them with tearful eyes. "No! No it's not true! I can't be dead! NO!"16
The twins felt tears fall, now. No matter how many times they did this, they would always cry. Not even the most hardened shinigami can resist the urge to spill tears at this moment.17
"Come with us Melissa-"18
"- It is time for you to pass on."19
They reached out and took her hands in their own. Melissa's lip trembled as she took a cautious step forward. She turned back to the dark-haired man crying in the street as paramedics took away her body.20
"Eric...."21
The boy looked up in shock, eyes locking with her own.22
"To fulfil your final wish-"23
"- You can say goodbye."24
"E-Eric..."25
"Mel...? Mel!" Eric's voice cracked, his eyes lightening with a split second of happiness. "Mel..? How...?"26
"Goodbye...Eric. I...I will always love you..."27
Melissa began to fade, and Eric's tears fell anew. "No...Mel - no! Please don't leave!"28
"I'm sorry, Eric. I Love you..."29
And then - just like that - she was gone.30
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Ok. this was written during my TEC class (I did it instead of making a game for my assignment...~,~). 32
My first time EVER writing a sort of sappy story...first time EVER writing a story involving a couple. 33
haha....THE TWINS DON'T HAVE NAMES!!! give me suggestions!?!? 34
Please and thank-you!!!! xD35
Names for the Twins??
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Ahh yes this brings me back to the days of death note and alot of cool anime series. Good job on everything it was a great read
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Wow!!
i loved it!! xD um... how about Nathan and Himasaki... i don't know....hmmmm.
haha, your first ever sappy story?!?!?!?
the emotion is great. i doubt anyone would not be able to cry at a moment like that, so i'm glad the Shinigami twins still cried.....

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xD
D'aww, Thanks Dai!
Haha, I'm thinking that the story will have lots of moments like that...But I guess the Twins will actually be the cause of said moments... :S
lol C=
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cool!
haha. it was awesome!.... names, names...mmmmmmmmmmm.... i don't know yet. give me a day or two. i'll come up with some and message you.
... you probably should have been doing your assignment you know. but, haha im glad you didn't. the story was awesome. i loved the description-y (hey, that shouuld be a word!!) words. i can't wait to see (well read - actually) more!!
your sap is not bad for a first try. i doubt i could write a sappy fic.... i don't think i'll try. btw i'm gunna try and update my KKM fic this weekend.....hopefully.

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OMG! YES!!
Hooray for your KKM fic!! xDDD
Yeah, i figured that i should have been doing the assignment....lol.
Thanks for the comment!! C=
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omg
so mutch better than my storys u need to help me make better ones lol hehehehehehehehe.............. i loved the emotion in this story i woudld change the names lol put some in. hmmm maby smelly and kelly rofl im not gud with names but i no u will make a gud name 4 them and i no u can make a gud name 4 ur story i mean come on the name u ahve atm lol hehedhehehehehe.... so lame jokes xD lol yay i got 8 points woop lol hmmm yer anyway ahve funnnnnnn
beginning: 5, language: 3, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 4.
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