You stole it, and yea I never said a word about it. You knew I never would. No matter how much it hurt, no matter how many bruises you gave me. Must have been easy, right? Like taking candy from a baby. Sure, I screamed and cried sometimes, and yea I did beg you not too and to stop. You didn’t though; you just kept going and going. Did you even care? Really, did you? You said you did, you said no one would ever hurt me, ever. I knew I'd get hurt some day, but not by you, and not like that. You hurt me, more than anyone ever could. What did you think because I was young that I wouldn’t remember, or was it that no one would believe me?1
I cant even sleep right anymore. I just keep tossing and turning, praying that in a few minutes I'd fall asleep. When I do eventually get to sleep, all I can see is what you did to me. It just keeps replaying over and over in my head. Remembering the days I woke up with bruises on my hips-ache- and the cuts on my wrists-burn. Six years had past before you did any of it. What did I do in six years time to make you do that to me? Was it something I did? Was it something I said? Please tell me. It’s been eight years and I still can’t forget it. 2
I can’t forget all the times I said daddy it hurts, or all the nights I stayed up crying because of the pain in my stomach. I cant forget all the times I told mommy I slipped and fell, or the times when they asked if I was alright and I said I was fine. But inside, I wasn’t all right, I wasn’t fine at all. I was filled with pain, and confused about why you did it. That’s all I want to know, all I want you to tell me. Why?
I could've kept going, but its best I didnt
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The first paragraph is exceptionally powerful. Very angry, like a screamed rant into the face of the person who let you down.
Painful to read that it was the protagonist's father that caused all the pain.
Not a 'nice' read, but undoubtedly a disturbing, and powerful one.
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this was well written. I wont say it was nice.. You know why. anyway. good write no doubt.
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inspired*
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all the things i have to say about this i cant say in a comment. you understand as well as i understand what inspured this. i loves you and this was a good writting.
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very nicely wwritten and i was hooked from start to finish. Great job on tye story. There are a few spelling mistakes but they can easily be fixed. Great job
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cool i really like it it was very nicely wwritten and i was hooked from start to finish. Great job on tye story.
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