He died, and i cried 1
then i wake 2
and cry some more 3
he dies in my dreams 4
every damn night 5
i hate him for dying 6
and i love him 7
for staying alive.
A contest entry
- Poetry!!! by Farhan.
230 points, ended November 6, 38 entries
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Nice and emotional. I like it.
You should really try to extend it a bit.
Anyways, Thanks for giving me such a nice read and good luck in the contest.
Happy writing.
Farhan. -
This made me cry. I am sorry you dream about this, I wish I could help you.
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wow
so strong. i like how you said so much in so little space. well done
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sad little poem..i hope u will try more happy stuff in future but this little sad stuff have strong emoions ...good work dear. good luck.
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Awww, sad but cute!!
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