Desperate

Dig deep inside myself and tear it out,1

My heart still beating in my my hand,2

I cannot tell you,3

You wouldn't understand!4

It's not my fault I feel this way! 5

Is there anything you want to say?6

I won't let you see me like this,7

Curled up in a ball in the corner.8

Bruises on my arm, made by my fist!9

Can you hear me on the outside,10

Screaming in!?11

You're so shallow, in your own mind.12

Paper thin!13

Kiss me this one last time.14

Make it a good one,15

This might be the last one. 16

Show me you loved me, 17

Tell me it's not just a lie.18

He's so far above me!19

Why is it that I still cry?20

Please tell me, cuz I need to know!21

Can you hear me on the outside,22

Screaming in!?23

You're so shallow, in your own mind.24

Paper thin!25

Hold me in your arms tonight,26

Don't let go,27

And tell me you love me again.28

Forget him and just kiss me tonight.29

Cuz I need this, 30

We need this.31

Can you hear me on the outside,32

Screaming in!?33

You're so shallow, in your own mind.34

Paper thin!35

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  • Asfand
    October 20
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    Interesting stuff.
    Thanks for entering!
    And good luck!


  • Pacific Sky
    September 1

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    Nice! I got the feel it was a song while reading it. Desperation is sure your strong point when writing! I could practically sing this song in my head, very well written with a good lengh too! Well done Tero!
    ~Pac