Hear your words? 1
They cut me like a knife 2
Bleeding out at your feet 3
Vanishing life4
Hear your words? 5
Face down in a crimson pool 6
Ripped apart at the seams7
I was your fool8
Hear your words? 9
Echoes of the past 10
Forgive me for dreaming 11
Future to last12
Hear your words? 13
Secrets and lies 14
Trapped by the truth15
She denies 16
Hear your words? 17
Dreaming of someday 18
but all I hear19
Too far away20
Hear your words? 21
Hopes dreams and fears22
how do you not know them all 23
After the years24
Hear your words? 25
So shallow and meek 26
Pointless and cruel 27
Leave me weak28
Hear your words? 29
To build or destroy 30
You were my world 31
I’m just a toy32
Hear your words? 33
You held the key 34
You were my savior 35
Still not free36
Hear your words? 37
Say what you mean 38
Is this your plan 39
Pain so keen 40
Hear your words? 41
Lost and found42
In your arms 43
Now bound44
Hear your words? 45
Thin and cold 46
Tired of this game 47
Way too old48
Hear my words 49
This is the end 50
Be my enemy?51
Or stay my friend?52
Author notes
Ok...umm... well...I wrote it the other day and this contest I figuted would be a great way to get feed back...not a fan of poetry on storywrite..but I'll survive... be harsh... I haven't written in a while so...I need it...
Blessed Be
Phoenix
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Best Poetry! by mememe6.
150 points, ended September 9, 54 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
what do you think?
Comments
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I might help to break this up into stanzas and have a rhyme theme. It would just make it easier to read and understand.
Other that that it was really good! You used your plot well, and I enjoyed it.
I hope you do well in my contest!

