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Dancing in circles with my arms thrown wide, I see the stars from side to side. 23
Beauty in grace, their flaring light, so powerful in life, a creation of might. 45
Sun leaves to darkness but the moon moves in, bringing with it light, washing away sin. 67
Moonlit nights, dancing so free, loving the world and living to see. 8
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Even though it is short this is a great poem, nice imagery
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You have a deft touch. Very good piece.
One niggle -> I find the 3rd line just a tad awkward but I do not know poetry.
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Thank you!! I'll try an smooth it out!
Mary
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wooooh, that's awesome. i love it. great imegery and... well that was beautiful. i really enjoy the way you express yourself
Kat
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Thank you so much!
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