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this is a story of my well some of it.1

my life was going good i was in love with someone and he broke my heart. i am ok but i hurt a little bit and there are some songs and after each one i will explain it.2

i cant stand with the weight of the world on my shoulders i can fight with the toughest of the tough i can laugh in the face of all my insecurities anytime anywhere anything im strong enough but when youre holding me like this im carelessly lost in your touch im completely defenseless baby its amost too much im helplessly hopelessly recklessly falling in love so let consequence do what it will to us i dont care let the stars stand as witness to it all say the word and tonight i will flollow you anywhere i jsut cant pretend anymore im too sturdy to fall but when youre holding me like this im carelessly lost in your touch im completly defenseless baby its almost too much im helplessly hopelessly recklessly falling in love i am not afraid i am not afraid cause when youre holding me like this im carelessly lost in your touch im completely defenseless baby its almost too much im helplessly hopelessly recklessly falling.. (halplessly hopelessly recklessly falling) im helplessly hopelessly recklessly falling in love.3

this song is the way i used to feel when the guy loved me and it felt so good to know he loved me now it will continue on with my life4

didnt i make you feel like you were the only man and i didnt i give you everything that a woman possibly can each time i tell myself i think ive had enough well im gonna show you baby that a woman can be tough so come on come on come on and take it take another little piece of my heart now baby take another littl epiece of my heart i know you will break it break annother little piece of my heart now baby cause you know you get it if it makes you feel good so good youre out on the street lookin good baby deep down in your heart you know that is aint right no youll never hear me cryin you know i cry all the time each time i tell myself that i cant stand the pain you hold me in your arms and i start singing once again so comeon come on come on and take it take another little piece of my heart now baby i know you will break it break another littl epiece of my heart now baby cause you know you got it if it makes you feel good so good each time i tell myself that icant stand the pain you hold me i your arms and i start singin once again so come on come on come on take it take anohter little piece of my heart now baby i know you will break it break another little piece of my heart now baby cause you know you got it if it makes you feel good so good 5

this is for the way he never got on and when he did he would apoligize and i would fall back in love with him so yeah this is what this one is for 6

if i had just one tear rollin down your cheek maybe i could cope maybe id get some sleep if ihad jsut one moment at yoru expense maybe all my misery would be well spent yeah could you cry a little lie just a little pretend that youre feeling a little more pain i gave now im wanting something in return so cry just a little for me if your love could be caged honey i would hold the key and conceal it underneath the pile of lies youve handed me and youd hunt those lies theyd be all youd ever find thatd be all your have to know for me to be fine yeah and youd cry a little and die jsut a little and maybe i would fell jsu ta littl eless pain i gave now im wanting something in return so cry jsut a littl efor me give it up baby i hear your doing fine nothings gonna save me til i see it in your eyes some kind of heartache honey give it a try i dont want pity i jsut want what is mine yeah woudl you cry a littl elie jsut a littl epreten that youre feeling a little more pain i gave now im wanting something in return so cry jsut a little for me yeah cry jsut a little for me whoa whoa could you cry a little for me hmmm yeah yeah7

this is for how he hurt me and i have been crying a lot so it would be good if i could hear him cry about it just once8

th elast song i am not gonna type on here but it is clalled we belong together the one underthis one we belong together is that song but it sands for that we really d=do belong ot gether i lsitened to it earlier and i understood how it felt so i know it feels now but it dont matter no more 9

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  • heartofpainfultears
    October 5, 2005
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    thanks tifnie


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    October 5, 2005
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    Good job! i like this.

  • heartofpainfultears
    October 4, 2005
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    it is ok with me and thanks for your kind words and that was a great suggestion but i kinda like mine there isnt really a tiltle for this one and thanks for saying that maybe one day i will meat you in teh future and i will sing them in front of you if i get over singing in front of ppl that is

  • Gay-Militant
    October 4, 2005
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    o and by the way, i know these songs aren't written by you, but i think you could sing them better.

  • Gay-Militant
    October 4, 2005
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    o and if i may suggest...a good title for this might be Cronicaled love. but thats just me. whatever you find good is fine. even if you want to leave it untitled

  • Gay-Militant
    October 4, 2005
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    this was beautiful liz. all of them were absolutely beautiful. if i was a record company, looking for good songs, i would pick you. these were absolutly beautiful. all emotions were shining through your words. your portrayed every feeling and caress with absolute prefection. everything was easy to realte to and everything stood out from one another. not one song was like the other. i mean, they all had to do with love, but it really cronicalled a real relationship. not like the ones you hear of in fairy tales. and that reality, that raw emotion, just was so intoxicating to read. i would love to hear these to music!!! i think they would be awesome. i am going to print this. and share it with my friends. if thats ok. and if its ok, do you mind if i have my friend put them on her locker? she does songs. but i want your permission first especially because these are so personal. i give you a million standing ovations.

  • heartofpainfultears
    October 2, 2005
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    well this really has to do with my life and the guy that hurt me the songs represent how it went teh first song i was happy then after that the songs got sadder because it got worse

  • heartofpainfultears
    October 2, 2005
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    no problem the whole time i was writing this i was crying

  • Warrior for God
    October 2, 2005
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    Hmmm....I like it...However, it seems that your heart is not where it needs to be. You have given it to the guy rather than God...why?

    The songs themselves were touching.

  • demoninfluenced
    October 2, 2005
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    The first one is beautiful and the other ones are sad and touching. I really enjoyed reading this!!! Thanks for sharing!!!

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