I am,

I am the girl,
Who looks so strong.
I am the girl,
Who’s just gone wrong.1

I am the girl,
Who never cries,
I am the girl,
Who’s full of lies.2

I am the girl,
Who always smiles,
I am the girl,
Who feels so vile.3

I am the girl,
Who’s finally broken,
I am the girl,
Who’s never spoken.4

I am the girl,
Who finally cried.
I am the girl,
Who will always hide.5

I am the girl,
Who’s smile faded.
I am the girl,
Who was never aided.6

I am the girl,
Who inside is dying.
I am the girl,
Who’s tired of trying.7

I am the girl,
Who’s had enough.
I am the girl,
Who says life is tough.8

I am the girl,
Who grabbed the blade.
I am the girl,
Who’s started to fade.9

I am the girl,
Who’s said goodbye.
I am the girl,
Who wants to die.

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  • jkingmaker
    August 30

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    Who always feels vile.3 -> perhaps who feels so vile?
    Who says life is tough.8 -> perhaps who knows life is tough

    This is a powerful piece and one that is well written.