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Angelica- I first saw him in seventh grade. The year before I finally got my braces off. That was the age where I looked like a teen but felt like a child. At twelve I believed in love more than any thing though I never felt it. When I first saw Logan I swore I finally felt it.1

He looked like he never knew what awkward was. Logan had spiky strawberry blonde hair and mischievous green eyes. Those eyes met mine and never looked away. I was surprised by how bold he was. Here was this new kid looking at me like he’s known me all his life.2

“I’m Logan.” He said bashfully proving he wasn’t as collected as he looked. I smiled at him convinced I found my soul mate. I didn’t know that those two words would entirely set my life on a course I never thought would come. Those two simple words where the start of it all.3

Logan- I didn't want to move to New york. I lived in Oklahoma the first eleven years of my life and I had no intention of leaveing. My parents had other plans so before i knew it we where in New York and I was starting seventh grade in a new school.4

She was staring at me that pretty girl with the auburn hair and the the giant brown puppy dog eyes. I couldn't understand why she was staring at me so I stared back hoping she would get uncomfortable and look away.5

She didn't get uncomfortable so I decided I might as well introduce myself. There was only one problem, I was painfully shy. "I'm Logan." I said convinced she would think I'm weird because of my accent or how shy I was. She suprised me by just smiling at me.6

"I love that name." She said and i was at peace she didn't hate me after all. We became friends quickly after that and during the summer before eighth grade I got up the courage to ask her out.7

She acted like she'd been waiting her whole life to say that. Again I was relived I didn't expect her to accepet so easily. I was still wondering why she was even friends with me.8

It was the two days before graduation and I was at Angelica's house while her parents where at some golfing tornament. She changed so much from seventh grade when I first met her. She'd grown out her hair and got curves. I realized I was falling more in love with her every day.9

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  • gothemchick101
    August 30

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    It's okay it seemed a little rushed to me. Maybe add what happened in some of those years that they were dating. It was okay description, but I don't really understand what's going on here besides they're in love.
    Good luck with your story!

    ~Dakota


  • jkingmaker
    August 29
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    elleven -> eleven
    Newyork - New York
    audburn -> auburn
    introduse -> introduce
    accepet -> accept

    Good start..keep writing


    • esimbf
      August 29
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      Thank you for the comment I'll be sure to fix those things