I Am The Girl

I am the girl who is always smiling,
I am the girl who can never cry
I am the girl who can’t show her feelings
Even if I’m dying inside.1

You are the ones who see right through me,
I am the girl with her head hung low.
I am the one that you just glance over,
I am the girl with the heaviest load.2

I am the girl with a thousand masks,
I am the girl with the pretty blue eyes.
You are the ones who think you know me,
But all you know are my costumes and lies.3

I am the girl who walks alone,
I am the girl with the tear-streaked face.
I am the one who takes your taunting,
The memory that you’ll try to erase.4

I am the girl with the wind in my hair,
I am the girl lying dead on the floor.
I am the girl screaming my heart out,
Just because I can’t take any more.5

I am the girl with the broken heart,
I am the girl with a blade at her wrists.
I am the girl with my hand on the trigger;
I know it can’t be worse than this.6

You are the ones who gave us these titles,
You are the ones who sent us to hell.
You are the ones who drove us to this,
We have only one thing to say.7

Farewell.

Author notes

OK so, a poem I wrote after a bad day. I'm not really sure why, since poetry's not usually my thing, but I guess I was just bored and lonely. It's my first willing poem (I've written ones for school) so be nice! It's kinda semi-autobiographical, except for the suicide and cutting of wrists.

Um...I do believe that is it. Hope you liked it!

~ LiveLoveJabberwocky ~

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  • DeathByChocolate
    September 25

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    Aww so sad/depressing. its like rlly good though...u shud write another, happy nice one...

    ok, i read it first on ur deviantart and there is a typo thingy so i figured i wud tell u on SW seeing as i dnt have a deviantart yet...:

    I am the girl*walks alone, *who...kk?
    zat eez all, i shall c u 2moro..


  • xXDaring2DreamXx
    September 3

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    I KNOW YOU! AND I LOVE YOU! and its a great poem. Next time, write a happy 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


  • Midnightgaze
    August 29
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    Like it?!

    I looooove it. This is a depressing, yet amazing piece. Well Done. xoxo


  • Shadow06
    August 28

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    It's awesome! You conveyed your emotions well. I find writing poetry a good way to let out some negativity. Good job. Keep writing!