the unwanted part 1

hiie my name is kristen, but you can call me krissy since everyone else does, well ihave deep blue almost black hair, crystal blue eyes which stand out on my pail white skin, and light rose pink lips. ihave a foster family now that my dad left me and my mum to strive for ourselves and my mum died because of alcohol poisoning, the only reason she drunk was because she couldnt take the pain of my dad leaving no more

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i know its real short but its like 5am and i need sleep i will write more 2morrow wen i am on mycomp not psp

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  • chasingpavements
    September 8
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    As said by the previous commenters, this little prologue of the sorts is going to lead to a great story .


  • Lullaby.x
    September 5

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    i love it so far. it sounds like a promising story with an interesting start. its' sad, but i can tell it's going to lead on to a good story line and i'll prolly end up getting addicted to it haha. can't wait for part two !

  • Dead Societyscene
    August 27
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    i love it

    that sad im srry