I Asked For Hope?

I Asked for Hope:
I Grab My Blade, Not My Rope
 1

I Asked For Love:
They Pick, But Dont Shove
 2

I Asked For Joy:
Words Hurt, But Dont Destroy
 3

I Asked For Rain:
I Got Tear Drops Filled With Pain
 4

I Asked For life:
Starts With A Smile, Ends With A knife
 5

I Asked For Sleep:
I Made A Mistake, And Cut To Deep
 6

My Eyes Close Slowly
My Legs Go Weak
NoBody Will Care
They All Called Me A Freak
 7

I Was Different From Them
They Never  Did Care
They Wont Even Notice
That Im Not There
8

9

Author notes

Thats Life, I Guess. For Me Anyways

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments

  • Dead Societyscene
    August 27

    Edit | Reply

    i love it

    thats how i feel
    ppl care
    i care
    i used 2 think that way like no one will care if i live or dir
    i still do kida
    no i kinda c that ppl care
    dont give up ok
    if i can get through with wanting 2 die everyday of my life u can 2
    if u wanna tolk im here for u ok


  • FrozenHeartedHalz
    August 27
    Edit | Reply
    I like it,It made me shiver xD