Boredom

Times march forward1

Has been forever halted2

Forced to wait3

For time to return4

The word on my lips5

Is impossible to say6

In describing such a state7

I will only make it worse8

But sadly9

Boredom will never cease10

In its taunting of me

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  • Farhan gold member
    August 28

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    Ummmmmmmmm nice!!!

    I liked the idea behind the poem but while reading, the rhythm was suddenly broken on the point when you said
    "But sadly
    the boredom will cease"
    Anyways, nice try.