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Swoosh, Ooh, - the wind moaned - Ooh, Woosh - Swoosh, Ooh, step step.2
I was running for the thrill of it...3
It was great being what I am. I love the feeling of running with the wind. It was great having it blowing in my face as I ran with the enchanted.4
I could run faster than any human being on the planet - but I am not a human being. I am the world's most dangerous predator, lurking beneath the shadows.5
I was free.6
My speed and agility to do anything was like having an adrenaline rush - but much more dramatic. It was like someone or something was trying to burst out of me. I was stronger more in the inside than the outside. But I can't have and adrenaline rush. I have nothing inside of me, a part from my forbidden soul.7
Almost to the darkened forest. I sniffed silently, food was awaiting my presence, the heart increasing in sound as I came nearer. My eyes were a deep black in the waters reflection as I passed the pond. It was a huge give away to what I am. 8
I approached the animal, glaring and leaped at the sprinting deer who was scared, even of his own fear. I hunted him down, and I bit his neck and sucked out what I loved most.9
Poor deer, if only he knew I looked different to who I really am. He probably thinks I'm a mountain lion or a wolf. But they don't lurk here. He knows what I am.10
He knows that I am a vegetarian vampire, a vampire who only feeds on the blood of animals...11
Author notes
This is a pre-write. I wrote this at school for another assignment. Hoe you enjoyed it, and live a comment to tell me what you think. My teacher really liked it, and gave me a high grade.
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Good job!
beginning: 4, language: 5, plot: 4, ending: 3, characters: 2.
