Hidden meanings,
In all his words.
He hides his feelings,
From the world.1
I understood him once,
Now he's gone and changed.
He's left me confused,
And worried too.2
He was so sweet,
With love,
And care.
Now he's so mean,
And selfish,
And vague.3
He's obsessed with his job,
And cares only for himself.
He isn't happy,
And makes it known to all.4
He blames me for everything,
That causes a fight.
We don't speak at all,
Until I've done right.5
He hits on another girl,
Then plays with me in the halls.
He sends mixed signals,
Leading me on.6
I wish that he,
Would just tell me what he needs.
Instead of causing me pain,
And making me leave.
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I agree with the previous comment, this made me think of some stories...
I love, love, LOVE the first verse, very nice.
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Aww, this is so sad. It reminds me of several stories I've read before of this kind of plot.
Always did like these kind of stories/poems...troubled guys, love 'em!
You did a fantastic job with this poem! Keep writing!
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i like it
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