A Jail that only Queens can make

There is a jail that only a few know about and its very unlucky if your there. The jail has high class guards that watch your every move. There are people here of all ages, but as for the youngest that would be me. You have to do something really horrible to be here like try to overthrow the queens who rule the world.1

I may be young but I'm smarter than all the adults. You see I've done experiments on everything you could think of and yes, even myself. Now, its pretty hard to overthrow the queens by yourself and you cant really ask many other people to be by your side. So here I am in this not known jail thinking of a way, a way to escape.2

I go around often to talk to people and see why they're here. Most of them are like me, wanting to over through the queens but got caught. There are a few that has stolen from the queens, and two that has stabbed them.3

Everyone here has done or tried something that has to do with the queens. I told you that I was smarter than all adults yes? Well not the queens, why? They are 1025 years old and still look like teenagers. They've found out how to extend their lives and who knows what else.4

I pretty much know the whole layout of this jail, but what's behind one door. That door has a guard there, except when he goes to the restroom. I've been at this jail for eight months now, I would have already been out but they don't have the tools I need to escape.5

The queens come here every month to check on things, and talk to me. They said that they find me interesting, maybe its because I'm young and here. They take me to a soundproof room with no windows but a recorder. One of the queens is really nice and I think I might have a crush on her, but I cant read her and something is wrong I can feel it.6

“So boy what's your name?” Said one queen7

“Come on Rebecca, you should treat him a little better then that. After all he's just ten years old and in our prison.” The other queen giggled.8

“Yes, but he tried to overthrow us and why are you so nice to him? Are you insane Rachel?” Rebecca asked9

“No! And you know that I hate 'that' word!” Rachel said and then whispered something to Rebecca “I'm punishing you later.” With a smile and eyes full of hatred.10

“Are you going to tell us your name?” Rebecca said with fear in her eyes, what can I say? I know how to read people.11

“My name is David.” I said12

“Oh hey, at least we're getting somewhere. Becca do you think our little experiment worked?” Rachel smiled13

“Who knows, David here, has been at this place for eight months....I've thought he would have tried something by now. I mean there are 'those' things here.” Rebecca said14

“True...Oh well our hour is up. David take care now and let me tell you something.” Rachel started “Get caught trying to escape even once, your punishment will be greater then death.”15

Worse than death? Is that even possible? She scares me but it feels like I've known her before, why is she the only person I can't read?! After they left things went back to normal here. Guards pay more attention to me than others anywhere close to my age. Maybe they hate me? One guard was on his cell phone and was talking with a worried expression on his face.16

When his call had ended he put handcuffs on me and took me to the door that I've never been behind. I wasn't paying attention to the guards much but one word stuck every time they said her name Rachel. What could the hard to read queen be trying to do? The door finally opened and the guard threw me in and shut the open door. I never thought they would be here! The tools that I need to escape and another door. There was a note on the door on the other side of the room:17

Those who enter here unprepared will face certain death. Use these tools wisely David for you shall need them if you ever plan to escape. You see I thought we could have some fun and I hope to see you've escaped at least once by the next time I visit. There is also a key to this room by the door you came in find it and good luck.18

Queen Rachel19

There's a key in the wall it was by the door I just came in so I took it. I opened the door and the guard forced me out quickly and painfully. In my room I started to make blue-prints of my new inventions that would help me escape. Normally I wouldn't worry about objects but since I don't have anything that is like my lab, I cant afford death right now.20

**(This Page Break is in Jail too)**21

A full month has passed and today was the queens' visitation day. Instead of both the queens coming today, just Rachel came. We were in the usual room with no windows but this time no recorder.22

“David, I thought you'd escaped by now...why not?” Rachel said23

“Er...I don't know.” I stuttered24

“You don't? Maybe your sick let me see.” She said as she felt my forehead, which made me blush a little. “You feel pretty warm have you been eating well?”25

I couldn't bring myself to reply so I just gave a nod and started to tear up. I just realized that I'm ten I should have a mom, but I cant remember her at all. By this point I realize I'm crying hard and I see her standing there...Smiling. It's not a warm smile, it was one with not many emotions but a smirk to see me crying.26

She must have noticed that I was looking at her, so she changed to a fake worried smile quickly. She came close to me and gave me a hug, I'm terrified of this person I don't know what she can do. I'm scared I just want to be left alone away from this place, everyone. Still crying and scared I don't know what to think and she talks.27

“For one split second I let you see myself and you start trembling. You are a smart boy but you don't remember much of anything do you David? Not even that your older than I am.” Rachel smirked “And yet your in a body of a ten year old, why did I save you?”28

“W-what?” I managed to get out29

“You don't know what I'm talking about?” She said as she brought up a picture “this is your body, in this little tube right here. And you cant get it back until you've earned it.”30

After that she left, as I just stood there shocked. She dropped the picture to the ground and just left, I picked up the picture and studied it. The guard came in, and took me to my room, for there I lay until I couldn't stay awake much longer and slept.31

**(Page Break)**32

A couple more months have passed by and David didn't really do that much any more. He hardly ate anything, he'd spend most of his time sleeping. His body was in a tube somewhere and the queens have control over it. He wasn't laying around for nothing though...because he was thinking of a way to escape.33

Finally an idea came to his head, he'd build something so unique that he's surely escape. The visitation day was in four days, he'd do something by then. He went to the room with his little key he had and began to work on his new weapon.34

For the next two days David was working on his weapon. His tiny deadly weapon. Two more days and he'd test his little weapon out, and hopefully escape. He just kept silent and held his little weapon close to him.35

The next day he wanted to try his weapon out to make sure it'd work on 'her'. The guard that didn't like him, perfect for testing his weapon. With one flick on his finger a tiny bug went on the guard and attached itself to him. And a few seconds of the guard picking and scratching at his neck he died.36

His weapon, his deadly tiny weapon was a success. Tomorrow he would defiantly get out of this prison he'd spent to much time at and get his body back. The thought of this, being able to escape, made his excited that he hardly went to sleep.37

**(Next day)**38

He woke up early today, because today he'd breath fresh air. Today he'd be free, today someone would die. The guard came to his little room to get him for visitation day. David got out of his room and followed the guard to the room where they normally went to.39

"Hello, David. You know I could get in trouble for seeing you just by myself. So I ask you this again why haven't you escaped?" Rachel asked with a smirk40

"Oh I will today." He replied starting to shake a little.41

"Really? You will that's good then. So you might get your body back after all...Or you might not." She said still smirking42

David flicked his little robotic bug-friend at the queen but it stopped in mid-flick. There was a portal appearing around it, and sucked the bug in. Silently, the portal opened back up behind David and there his own but attached itself to him.43

"W-what?! No that's not suppose to happen. H-how'd you do that?" He asked trying to get his bug off his neck.44

"You honestly don't think that we could figure out how to extend out life and look the same, and not figure anything else out? Really, you have book smart but no common sense David." She actually had an actual sad frown on her face. "I don't want to die, I didn't want you to die. I saved you once but I wont save you again. I...I really did love you so much..." 45

I saw a tear in her eye...A real tear streaming down her face. But that's the last thing I saw before I died. I died by my own invention, and found that she had feelings under her appearance. Feelings, huh? Who knew? But, I'm free from this Jail that's not known. Free of it and stored in a test tube. Where I will stay until 'she' wants to put my memories, emotions, feelings, sight, everything back together in my old body.46

Yes, I'm dead the ten year old David is dead. But, she saved my memories from before and plans to use them somehow. Will she put them back together? Will I be able to walk this Earth once more? I don't know, but she does and she won't tell anyone.

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