Dear Lady Pixie,1
I welcomed the sun into my body, my entire body singing with euphoria as I united with half of my soul…and the other half was watching me through eyes colored like the Earth.2
In my novel, The Sun Thief, Naila Remsy is the last of the Sun Keepers. Her entire race was hunted and slaughtered for their ability to manipulate light by the Night Keepers (vampires, known to most). She's notoriously known in Atlantean society as Al Comptanya—The Sun Thief—for her habit of robbing the rich during the day. She's finally captured by the sinfully handsome Tristan Dalmar and his legendary bounty hunting team, all revered for their incredible skills; but much to the two's dismay, they're united against a common, ruthless enemy. It's suddenly a battle for her secret, her life, her heart—and her people, because this bounty hunter just might posses the means to saving her fallen people. However, underneath it all lays a secret that could forever change the face of Atlantis itself…3
The Sun Thief is a completed 70,000-word young adult, fantasy/romance novel set in contemporary Atlantis. I completed this novel at age fifteen. At age thirteen, I completed and self-published my first novel, I’m a Nobody, through Authorhouse. At fifteen, I published my second novel, A Girl’s Guide to Atlantis through the same company. The Sun Thief is the second in a series of novels that will revolve on life in Atlantis. 4
As for trophies, I have won 24 gold, 16 silver, 12 bronze, and 19 honourable mentions.5
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.6
Sincerely,7
Neomaxizoondweebie
A contest entry
- Query Me by Lady Pixie.
250 points, ended August 30, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A great query letter! It's formatted correctly, hooks in the beginning, gives the brief synopsis and writer bio and is professional and to the point. You've earned a finalist spot for sure and thank you for entering the contest


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Thanks your contest is great practice!
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Very official; as well as short and to the point. Good job and I know this book will be good as I helped edit it!
The best part of this letter was your short promo of the book at the beginning. Giving the reader a little taste of your amazing talent.


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Thanksss! :]]
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