Lost Sinners Satvation Exerpt

And the Gates of Hell opened, spewing forth the wails of the damned and the lost. Every being in his fiber told him to run, to get as far away from here as he possilby can, but he forced himself to move forward across the hard baked ground. He was doing this for the one he loved, he reminded himself as the smell of burning feathers reahed his and agony danced across his back, forcing him to him knees more that once. But each time he got back up, his mind repeating the same thing over and over. He was doing this for Jake

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