Des`ire's Story Chapter 11

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  • December 14, 2005
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    There is a lot of anger and sense of giving up in this story, yet the mind is still full of questions that go unanswered. The quote are amazing yet strange they put one's self down with a sense of self failure. I like how you said maybe it's not the world that is changing but yourself.... the world changes, just not as fast as we change.