I held the little girl under water as her body twitched and kicked for freedom. I yanked the back of her hair, pulled her from the water and watched as she gasped for breath. I turned to her father, who had been tied to a chair, duct tape covering his mouth. A gun is pointed at his head, secured tightly with his finger on the trigger by the same duct tape. I ask, "Shall I continue, or do you wish to end this now?"1
You could hear his muffled cries beneath the duct tape. I pause for a moment, and then, again, I viciously dunk the child's head into the water. She scratches at my arm in a feeble but desperate attempt to escape. I wait almost a minute this time before pulling her from the water and watch as she spits and begins to cough. I hold her with one hand and slap her repeatedly with the other. 2
This has been going on for just over a half an hour now. Blood drips from the child's face as a result of my blows. I grab her by the throat and begin to choke her. I stare into her father's eyes, and yell, "See? See what you are doing to her? You could end this now, and I'll set her free. All it takes is one moment of courage."3
Our eyes are locked. We stare at each other for a few seconds, and again, I submerge the poor child. She's not kicking or screaming this time. It seems as though she has given up. Just when I'm ready to kill her, I hear a boom over my left shoulder. I turn, and the father has blown the right side of his face and head to pieces. He's dead. 4
I guess after forty minutes of torture, he couldn't bear to watch his little girl suffer anymore. I pull the child from the water for the last time. Her body is almost lifeless. I drop it on the ground and slowly walk away.5
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This story describes a method of killing someone.
I read and commented on Murdering me for fun by TheTwistedVagabond
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hahaha horibble. go get your head checked. no seriously..NOW!
it was well written. you freak.
but you call this a poem? it's a story! ohwell. good write. and thanx for entering -
It's a scary thought that someone can write about such horror, but I stuck with it and read, and I must say craziness aside, you've written a great story here..shocking, cruel, horrific, but great nonetheless. Hey, someone's gotta do it, where else would we get all those psyco films from if not?
Wishing you all the best in this contest, blessings, Sandi -
wow, thats like so messed up, like what was goin through your head? was it a dream? hopefully not a fantasy.......well it was pretty cool for what it was i guess, scary situation man..ahhhhhhh
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This is horrible to read, but you have written something that is horrible well, if there is such a thing as that. Could not pull away, and hated myself for it.
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wow that was insane, it really drew me in. very descriptive too, i could picture the whole thing. what a strong piece!! amazing job with this. I am just speechless
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