Des`ire's Story Chapter 8

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  • December 14, 2005
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    Powerful write about love
    {Then I guess intimacy is suppose to spawn or should spawn. After learning what intimacy is, isn’t it the same thing as friendship?} Love isn't real unless it is youe best friend that you love , if there was never friendship then the love was never there to begin , it's just an illusion of the heart
    Ther is no way to describe love any deeper then you have in your last paragraph { I feel like I am missing something here, like I still do not understand what love is. Most people don’t even try to understand, they just go on day after day taking life as it hit them. I’m not like that, it’s to easy to never look back or ahead or inward and outward. I want to know, I want to understand. What makes us live for love? Without it why breathe? I’m not talking about the lungs and heart working together to take in air and expel it. I’m talking to emotionally breathe in someone’s emotions and to expel them back to that someone. Isn’t that love? Aren’t emotions what radiate from us? Like some non verbal form of communication, and invisible form of writing that is permanently engraved in our hearts, mind, spirit, and soul.}