Des`ire's Story Chapter 6

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  • December 14, 2005
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    I like these writes of your about your deep thoughts they tend to be very persoanl and open. {What do we have together, nothing... we are a void, we are chaos... echoing the destruction of ourselves.} this is a good discriptive line about how couples stay together and the only thing they are accomplishing is the destruction of themselves.
    were you question him you you also question yourself { All I want to do now is run from him, yet my legs take me no where. They keep me paralyzed in fear, so am I any less a coward than he?} and I can't help but feel you are very honest person who questions self and admits and accepts the answer that appears