Shadow

Ok heres a sumary of the story i wrote last year called shadow.  Its too long to type............1

There is a boy who believes that his shadow is alive.  His mom died when he was younge and he believes that she is alive still.  He searches and searches.  He is at the ocean and a voice tells him to swim into the ocean and look for his mom.  He finds his mom lighting up and God talks to him.  God was there for him all along and he will always be................2

that was a summary of the story though.  If you want to learn more thanadd a coment!! Thanks!3

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  • -Rosie-
    October 22, 2004
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    thanks Reded295!

  • Choo Choo
    October 22, 2004
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    Cool story ahug4me08


  • September 11, 2004
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    Great! I want to actually read this in a story. Could you write out the whole story? It sounds as though its going to be a good one

    pinkwhite xxx

  • -Rosie-
    September 11, 2004
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    I don't know

  • Button1991
    February 15, 2004
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    Great write i like it any how how long is your story
    e-mail me marie16316@yahoo.com

  • -Rosie-
    December 9, 2003
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    Well it's way too long to type and it will take days when i only have one so i did a sumary of it. Anyways what part did you like so much? Email me at Jackiew650@aol.com

  • Wizzy Jo
    December 9, 2003
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    that was good please please please type out the full story although its a poetry website lol! just that little part made me want to read more but i cant because its not there


    wizzy jo

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